Bleeding Blue (SEQUEL!!)

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"Our end was inevitable. It was pronounced from the beginning. But why couldn’t something happen, like a massive turn of events to change our destiny?

Every single time he molds his hands into mine, I feel as though everything is perfect in this world. Every time he gives me a smile, I know that I am falling deeper in love with him. Every single time we sit together to have our meals, I know that I want a life with him… Just not here and not like this.

If only we were different people with different situations, then maybe it wouldn’t hurt so much every time we think of the future. It is as though we are both holding onto a bomb, already sparked at its bud. It is going to explode and we are both going to suffer."

Foreword

Jo is kidnapped and taken to an island by a wanted criminal named Byun Baekhyun. On that little paradise, surrounded by waters she finds the part of the criminal which is overlooked by everyone.

He's the gentle wind and the rising sun instead of the storm and the scorching heat.

 

 


 

 

This is my entry to Laulau95's writing contest. It's my first time ever trying out on a competition and I am excited!

Click here to know more on the contest.

Genre: Angst, Fluff, Criminal AU

Characters: Baekhyun, OC & Xuimin

Prompts: I was not directly inspired by a prompt but I did take out some prompts and have incorporated it into my story.

“I just need to know that you won’t forget about me.”- Don’t forget about me, Cloves.

“-but I guess, if I love you, I should let you move on.” – 17 Again ( 2009)

“ I was born when she kissed me, I died when she left. I lived a few weeks, the time that she loved me.” – In a Lonely Place (1950)

“If I told you where I’ve been, would you still call me baby?” –Dark Star, Jaymes Young.

Length: Approximately 10 chapters.

I'd appreciate lots if you can read through it and help me out by picking out my mistakes or just simply encourage me. I'm an amateur writer. Go easy on me. :)

 

 

 


 

The sequel to this story is here after four years of finishing the story T.T Thank you for all the immense support.

Here's the link to the story ^^

 

“Let’s pray that we meet in the next life when we are both very normal, very lively, and leading beautiful lives.”

 

The first time I met Byun Baekhyun, the quiet poet slash scholar, he ran into me with his bike, knocking me onto a bed of wildflowers.

The second time I met Byun Baekhyun, he bumped into me so hard everything in my hands went flying.

The third time I met Byun Baekhyun, he spilled his coffee all over my crisp white shirt.

And those were just the first three times.

Needless to say, my eyes ran red everytime I saw him.

 


 

 

That amazing poster is made by CrownedMayhem!

Thank you so much for your love. I love it :')

(Offline reading is only available for friends :))

 


 

Check my other stories:

Ugly

Ugly
Baekhyun x OC
Free Hug

Free Hugs
Kai x OC
nirvana

Nirvana
Minseok x OC
WAIT

WAIT
Kai x OC
CW

Colder Weather
Kyungsoo x OC
WIL

What is love
Sehun x OC
bleeding blue

Bleeding Blue
Baekhyun x OC
running red

Running Red
Baekhyun x OC

 

rookies

Rookies
Chanyeol x OC
roses

Roses
Baekhyun x OC
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Owlrose
(BLEEDING BLUE) The long-awaited sequel to this heartbreaking story is finally here and it is called Running Red. Please give it a shot if you still, like me haven't moved on from this. ^^
https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1474875

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byunbaek_hyun34
#1
Chapter 10: I really love this story:)
I have never cried this much while reading any fic but bleeding blue really pulled my heartstrings. I don't think there can be any other book rather than bleeding blue itself which can make it's readers cry so badly.
Hopefully their is sequel for this and now I am going to read it and let my heart cool down for both Baek and Joo.
I really really loved reading this!!!!
Thank you author for writing such an amazing and lovely fic♥♥
parkshiza #2
Chapter 10: writer nim yes I really wanted to kill u now ....and now I think my balls are coming out from my eyes because of all the cries ...my heart is bleeding now........its the best fic for crying ...I'm leaving a comment here for reminding myself of a strong reason to cry again
Stick
#3
Chapter 10: Hiiiiiii .....
Yeah i was reading this last night I just craved it and wanted a reason to cry🙂....and i think i should change my name from stick to stickcreep 😭....
And one more thing...
As yk I can't just stop reading it ok so and I really want more people to appreciate this as well as running red!!!!....
So I'm going to put this story link on my Instagram as a story or even as a link in my bio I just can't stop thinking about this and feel ing happy because this story is literally like a baby for me and this story and the sequel needs more attention.... I will NOT do this without your permission obviously so please say yes😭😭😭....
Stick
#4
Chapter 11: Look who's here to scratch the wound open!!!!...

Absolutely not me :')....

I can't I seriously can't this story has been my all time fav but i don't read it BECAUSE IK I WILL CRY RIVER!!!!! AND CAN WE JUST TALK ABOUT RUNNING RED POSTER!!! PLEASE.....THIS BAEKHYUN ALWAYS MAKE ME WANT TO CHANGE MY BIAS FROM CHANYEOL TO HIM, HE'S A LITERAL BIAS WRECKER!!!!!!😭😭....

( I'm crying and my mum's giving me looks and idc now)......

I AM OFFICIALLY IN LOVE WITH BLEEDING BLUE'S BAEKHYUN......

AND I LOVE YOUR WRITING TOO!!!!.. BECAUSE THIS WAS THE STORY THAT MADE ME BAEKHYUN ADDICT!!!:')
I'm gonna read running red now!!!
AiiSoo #5
Chapter 10: I admit. I’ve delayed reading this for the longest time because I took a peek of the last chapter. Just a small peek. I figured I can’t handle all the heart-wrenching sorrow at that time, so I postponed reading this story till now. I came back because of the sequel. I haven’t read it yet but reading the title kinda makes me recall that I’ve read a similar title but not sure from where. After I started reading this, then I clearly remember. Thank God that i read this in my room alone so I can cry buckets without restraint. I was a sobbing mess. Never wanted my parents to see this sight of me.
This is a really good read. I appreciate the sweetness that Baekhyun and Jo had on the island despite their not so sure future and inner conflicts. I felt the joy when they mingle with the islanders, felt the pain when they lost Grandpa. I think this is why I prefer to read rather than watching movies. I can pause to reread to feel and imagine the things happenings whenever and for however long that I want. It’s been so long that I cried real hard like this, so thank you for writing such a great and wonderful story. Eventhough the ending is not a happy ending for Baekhyun and Jo, I know that they’ve found their closures. And I’m glad for that. It is as if they are real characters alive. For me, your writing comes alive. I hope i expressed it good enough. I’m not that good with words.
I might need a few hours break then I start reading the sequel. From the foreword it seems like fluffs and I can’t wait to read it. Hoping for a happy ending for Jo and Baekhyun. Thanks again for this beautiful writing.
Snakerfly
#6
Chapter 10: PAIN PAIN PAIN PAIN PAIN😭💔
I'm crying, this is such a heartbreaking story. Oh my poor heart can't handle this. Your writing style is beautiful, I love those poems and letters. I was hoping it just Jo's dreams or something but nooooo— he's gone, Baek is gone. If only fate could be nice to them😔
Guess what, blue has always been my favourite color. I think from now on I will always remember about this story every time I see blue, or every time I go to the beach💔 But that's okay, it proves that this story IS AMAZING. Thank you so much for making this story, I really really really enjoyed it! And I'm so grateful you give us the sequel. Can't wait to see their happy ending there❤️
Meeshma
#7
Chapter 10: Dear author u made Me a crying mess . I don't know how to describe my feelings. I'm so sorry to read this diamond this late. Thank you sooo much for the story.
Shawolgurl
#8
Chapter 10: Where have i been???!!!! Oh my god this is so beautiful, i literally bawling my eyes out. I no longer have tears anymore.

BRAVO!!! *standing ovation*

Thank you for sharing this story.. and thank you for giving us a sequel.. I'm gonna go and read it now <3
gogogirl26 #9
Chapter 11: This so beautifully heartbreakinv T.T
Their love is soooo pure. But fate wasnt with them. Baek is such a poor boy in this cruel wolrd he just simply want to be happy and beinhg loved. Cant stop crying for baek T.T he sacrifice all even his life for the one he loved the most