Original Fluff Ball

Description

Xiao Lurin, a fluff ball or a badass in disguise? She can be nice but dangerous in a second. Ever wonder who could tie her up and put her on her toes every time they meet? What will happen when she meets BTS in her territory? Is war going to break out when BTS get in her way? In the process of all those bickering, bit by bit of Xiao Lurin's past gets unveiled. What will BTS do when she's far from what they thought she really is? An Angel in a Demon mask, waiting for a bright light to outshine the mask so the Angel could live, again. 

Foreword

Don't follow, LEAD 

Not saying much, I'm here to improve my English cause this site helps me a lot in passing my high school. Others asked me how I got what I achieve and my answer was this site.. They said it's bull, that I'm lying, not wanting to share my way of learning English.. Damn what people say, I'm telling the truth anyway.. Believe me or not, it's your problem. 

Please do comments if I can improve in any aspect. Do upvote if you like the story.. Beg me pardon about the rattles up there.. Enjoy~~ :D

Author's Thoughts
Ryan-Leonard
I'm thinking of taking down both of my story cause I don't know how you feel about it.. What I really mean here is, I'm afraid that mine is not good enough and doesn't satisfy anyone. If you still want me to continue, do let me know. If not, I'll just take it down. For now, that's what I think.
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imemyself07 #1
Chapter 25: Oooh 0_0
imemyself07 #2
Chapter 22: Omg so happy with the update! :)
omgsunnie #3
Please dont give up on your writing!/I know it maybe hard for your side since an author like you want nothing but pure feedback to see how it flows. But my advice never give up despite the little comments that you recieve you know some may enjoying it secretly just they are bad in words! Oh Im going to start reading your story soon and let you know how it goes <33 until then... hang on there and take your time to get back on track';))))))
Big_Mama #4
Chapter 20: It is a good piece of writing. Do continue writing it please.
BilliePark #5
Chapter 20: " Place your hand over your heart. Feel that? That's called a purpose." Loved this. And many are forgetting about it.
hunmi94 #6
Chapter 20: Waaa,hope lurin will go back to earth...im sure that bts worrying her to much...
itchycrotch #7
cool
imemyself07 #8
Chapter 19: Your story is amazing! I look forward to the rest of it :)
hunmi94 #9
Chapter 16: good chapter authornim...and jungkook looks so damn funny when he is jealous...
hunmi94 #10
Chapter 15: good job authornim,this chapter is great... poor lurin tho,she seems suffering too much..and,kookie looks cute worried sick for her...
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