Chapter 5: sorry authornim but can we have a sequel.for this...hihi

Chapter 5: Needs more polishing. But the story is nice. :)

Chapter 5: Woaah i love this

Chapter 5: Super niceeeeee!!!!!!!

Chapter 5: i can really see this happening lmao. especially after that radio of ONE calling hanbin them acting all friendly and sassily sweet to one another. careful, jiwon, hanbin is loved by many lololol

Chapter 2: One is the hyung kekekkekekekke

Chapter 5: Hahahah.. The last part mad eme cringe so hard, bobby was being so tomantic with hanbinnie..
Thank you for wanting to write about jealous Binnie as well. I hope he would be a bit y, when he is jealous, hahahaha...
Your writing skills are good, maybe you'll need to improve more on your story and character's development when writing, because your english is already good.. It is just my opinion, hope you will keep on writing.. ganbatte!!

Chapter 5: OH. MY. GOD. YOU GUYS WILL WAKE THE MEMBERS UP!!!!! OHMYGOD THIS IS PRICELESS!!! HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAH

Chapter 4: thanks for updating <3 pls update soon too xD

Chapter 4: ohmygooood jiwon you'll be sick if you go out like that again