Commotion

Let me love you till you love yourself
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Hanuel found Jonghyun on her way to the cafeteria and they walked together. Jonghyun had asked how her first classes had gone and she told him everything she could remember.

 

“You wouldn't believe what the teacher had said. Apparently, we’re all made out of these little things that are all over our bodies and he called them ‘cells’. I don’t know if to believe it or not though, it seems absurd” she said while pondering about all the other things she learned.

 

Jonghyun chuckled at her statement. “After being to school for a bit you begin to see that a lot of things that may seem stupid or absurd start to make sense and appear normal,” he said while opening the door for Haneul to enter the cafeteria.

 

They both sat down with their lunches and started to chat away about anything and everything. Halfway through discussing how apples aren’t different, it’s just that they put something in them to make them shiny. (She wasn’t having that, she knew they put something in there to poison people). She started to glance around the room, she stopped and set her eyes on a lonely figure a few tables away from hers. It was the guy that sat beside her, ‘Chanyeol’ she recalled was his name. She didn’t know why he was alone but she wanted to go sit with him.

 

Just as she was about to ask Jonghyun if they could go, she saw one of the vampires her brother warned her about that morning approach him. She saw the vampire pat his back lightly and sit beside him. She hissed without realizing it and before she knew it she was starting to stand up from her chair. Jonghyun having noticed her strange behavior grabbed her wrist and kept her in place.

 

“What’s wrong? Why are you acting like this?” he asked concerned.

 

“Huh?, oh sorry it’s nothing, I just...I thought I saw something” she said while fixing herself up.

 

“Ok, as long as you’re fine…” he said while looking over her and then glance around the room. He wasn’t stupid he knew something was bothering her, at least enough to make her hiss. He wanted to know what it was but he knew that if he asked he wouldn’t be able to get a response. He decided that he would find out later and for now, he would just take her mind out of it.

 

Lunch passed by and they both headed back to their classrooms. Jonghyun walked Haneul to class and hugged her bye.

 

“I have a meeting with a teacher after school so wait for me on one of the benches by the doors okay?” he said and Haneul nodded her head.

 

They separated from the hug and she went into the classroom to sit down. She looked over at Chanyeol who was already sitting beside her. “Hi, how was your lunch?” she asked. She also wanted to ask why he was sitting and talking with the vampire but decided to leave that for another time.

 

Chanyeol turned to look at her and smiled a little. “It went well thanks, how ab

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Marlene52
Hello everyone! I've been gone for a really long time... sorry about that. I'm gonna be jumping back in and do some editing, I reread the story and it could use it. SO if you see updates it will most likely be me going back in and fixing some things.

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damnationSUruck
#1
Chapter 18: Oh boy. That POV did not sound pretty. I'm really looking forward to seeing what happens between Chanyeol and Haneul! Seriously, this story has established some really nice dynamics what with the romance aspect as well as Baekhyun and the rest of Exo. I'm enjoying reading it all.
Light_orb
#2
Chapter 19: He worked really hard and gained our Respect and love for him... He will always be there in our heart... I hope he is in a good place and have a Beautiful journey ahead in the heaven... Rest in peace our ANGEL.
seductive_fairy
#3
Chapter 9: hehe Chanyeol, feeling hot all of sudden huh? maybe feeling nervous because Haneul sit beside you or you're thinking things with Haneul in your mind?
LOL.....

and duhh, i really hate when boys gang up on weak people. such a bully...luckily Jongie came on the right time....
seductive_fairy
#4
Chapter 6: what the....??!
omg..is that why they behave that way?
lol...u think too fast big bro....your sis just adjusting to a new world, new environment, new people and new man...*wink*
but if you wait for the right time, then maybe it'll be too late...
seductive_fairy
#5
Chapter 3: phew....she was hibernating for 300 years...omg...her bones should be creaking by now..lol
but i do agree about too much burden especially when you feel exhausted from the inside, u'll feel like sleeping...just take a rest and hibernate for as long as you could.

and wow, i just asked about her twin yesterday and got the answer in the very next chapter
seductive_fairy
#6
Chapter 1: just read through the plot.
i was wondering if her power is fire?
everything around her become ashes....
does that include her twin brother and the demons?
omg, does that means she accidentally killed her twin?
seductive_fairy
#7
the plot sounds interesting to me...
i'll give this a try.
damnationSUruck
#8
Chapter 14: Suuuuper cute! I'm enjoying the chemistry between Chanyeol and Haneul a lot, and grandma in this chapter was the most adorable! I absolutely love the way she reacted to him going out, haha, it was both sweet and hilarious at the same time. Nice work! I'm enjoying this story and I can't wait to see what happens next.
damnationSUruck
#9
Chapter 13: Ah, things are picking up nicely. I'm really liking the direction this story is going in so far, and all the best with updates!