Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Aw, Baekhyun is so Baekhyun by saying “Jealous? My girlfriend” I can’t stop grinning.
Btw, I want a day lying on my loved one’s lap & stargazing too. That’s pure romance.

Chapter 1: Yes please let it begin~~

Chapter 1: The GIF legit scared the out of me, ing Byun Baekhyun.... Anyway, this story was so short, but so endearing! Baekhyun is so disgustingly sweet, it made me cringe hahahaha Not complaining though.

I really appreciate short one-shots, especially when it comes to reading entries for BR. But I felt like this was a little TOO short. There wasn't enough development or emotions for readers to feel attached to the characters and the stories. It felt like you were only touching on the subject and then moving away from it; like for the scene where she wrote the letter, it would have been better if you also included her thoughts, emotions and opinions on each sentence so we can see what it's like for her to write the note. And the scene where they finally got to talk about it, it felt like Baekhyun was insincere because you only touched on the topic so lightly before moving on... Give him a chance to apologise properly, give her some time to ponder over his apology, make the entire thing feel more... dramatic, in some way, because as readers, we can't see what is happening in your head while you write this, so it's always better to drag things out and expand a little more so we get to see everything. Other than that, I didn't see much of a problem with the rest of the story. :)

Thank you for joining Blossom Roads! I hope you enjoyed writing your very first one-shot!!! Very proud of you! And I also hope that through this contest, you'll learn to improve in your writing and be motivated to write more!

xoxo

Chapter 1: Short and sweet..