Pink Polaroid camera

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It's not that I believe it
but that I want to try holding out
because this is
all that I can do
I want to stay
I want to dream more
Even so, what I'm saying is
that it's time to leave
Yeah it's my truth
It's my truth
I will be covered with wounds
But it's my fate
It's my fate
Still, I want to struggle and fight
Maybe I, I can never fly
I can't fly like the flower petals over there
Or as though I have wings
Maybe I, I can't touch the sky
Still, I want to stretch my hand out
I want to run, just a bit more
I'm just walking and walking, among this darkness
My happy times asked me this question
You, are you really okay, it asked me
Oh no
I replied, no, I'm so afraid
Still, I hold the 6 flowers tightly in my hands
I, I'm just walking, I said
Oh no
But it's my fate
It's my fate
Still, I want to struggle and fight
Maybe I, I can never fly
I can't fly like the flower petals over there
Or as though I have wings
Maybe I, I can't touch the sky
Still, I want to stretch my hand out
I want to run, just a bit more
Wide awake, wide awake, wide awake
Don't cry
Wide awake, wide awake, wide awake
No lie
Wide awake, wide awake, wide awake
Don't cry
Wide awake, wide awake, wide awake
No lie
Maybe I, I can never fly
I can't fly like the flower petals over there
Or as though I have wings
Maybe I, I can't touch the sky
Still, I want to stretch my hand out
I want to run,
Just a bit more

-Jin

Foreword

So... An extremely short one shot.... enjoy!

*INSPIRED FROM WINGS SHORT STORY: #7 AWAKE*

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-natsukim #1
Chapter 1: Hello. I've done reading this.
I know this is an English assignment to you, but, if you want to post it in Aff, you need to know that not the reader isn't one person, but many, which i want to say, it's better you post it like fanfic style.
It's written beautifully but, my first impression just looking through this page, I was like "is it an essay?" rather than "ahh... this is a fanfic.". In my opinion, you should break them into more paragraphs, especially, when Seokjin was trying to do something. For example, in first paragraph, you can break it between 'There, sits a glossy scarlet apple.' and 'As he reaches...'. And also, when you want to stress about the sound, 'Thump', 'Click' etc, I think it will be better than way.
This fic shouts EMOTION and also gives some mysterious vibe, kinda like it, but I wish you write like fanfic style, which will be more interesting and people wanting to read this.

I hope this is helpful :)
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