I got here from ms. Vanillasushi's recommendation. She's my best ever fave writer. And if she recommended it only means you're a great writer as well :)

Chapter 1: Ohhhh I still love this!! I think I blush like an idiot everytime I read this, oh boy ?

Oh. I remember reading this on ao3 and actually really liking it so much it had me actually shipping chenlay. The adorableness in this fic just hits home.

Chapter 1: I never read boyxboy unless it's just a friendship kind of thing, and i don't even ship xingdae but this is so damn cute >< i grinned so hard throughout the story XD sehun and baek really XD i would strangle them if i could XD

Chapter 1: I ING LOVE THIS YOU DON'T EVEN KNOW OMG IT'S SO CUTE OMG AND I FEEL IT SO MUCH YOU DON'T EVEN KNOW :3

Chapter 1: This was so long. Tbh I actually didn't think I'd finish it bc i don't read much boyxboy, and even if I do, I don't read xingdae... But I gave it a shot anyway and I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!! It's so ing cute, I love how Jongdae's constantly blushing, it's so fiuakfhgnkjfa!!!!!! And Sehun, oh my god, he talked so much... For the first time ever I was just "when will you ever SHUT UP" (in the most endearing manner though) but I thought all of the boys were so ing cute together!!! And when Jongdae thought Baekhyun was a second Sehun, I was just hoping he'd dump CY for Sehun LOL.... (Can you tell that i ship SeBaek ing hard even if I don't do exactly do shipping LOL)

Anyway!! I didn't think there was much to critique, your writing is almost perfect! I just thought that you should have made the text messages, and things a character said before but was not made a dialogue, look different from your usual font. It made things a little confusing, though still understandable and readable after a little bit of buffering. Usually italicising them would do the trick just fine :) Another thing was your ending, I thought it seemed like you wanted to extend it a little bit more but didn't want it to go on for too long either, but you're also trying to look for that perfect line to end on. I'm not sure if that's how you really felt but if you indeed thought that, I feel like just ending it on the maple syrup bit might have been a perfect ending. Though extending it a little bit more wasn't an issue, and it didn't make me like this story any less. I'm sure other readers feel the same. Also, I loved how this whole fic was kind of centred around flowers, it's really cute and very meaningful! Even until the end, you made sure to integrate some of those flower language! That's really all on the critiques, you really did a very good job, I wonder if you're a longtime writer?

Anyways, thank you for joining Blossom Roads! I hope you enjoyed writing this as much as I enjoyed reading it! It was honestly a joy! I was laughing so much, thank you for that! And I hope that through this contest, you'll be motivated to write more and to continue improving in your writing :)

xoxo

Chapter 1: Love this!! ❤❤ And not just because Xingdae is my favorite OTP but also this is very well written and cute and endearing and all the 'awwww' in the world!

Chapter 1: Wow, loved this story so much. My Xingdae feels ♥♥♥

Chapter 1: Awww awww awwwwwww. This is soooooo cute

Chapter 1: Loved it!!! It gave me such feels and everyone was so endearing. When it turned out to be Luhan I started laughing so hard my cat got scared : ) I'm definitely going to be reading this one again, thanks for the story!