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Author's Notes

 

Might contain side SaTzu and other Twice members~

Deciding to move back to the US with her daughter, divorcee Im Nayeon wants the best for her young one. Though, her luckless fortune seems to be following her around. She'd simply taken her daughter to the bathroom when she'd come out with the place in commotion. Stranded at the airport which is currently under lockdown, she finds herself relying on the one person she never thought she'd meet, Myoui Mina. Will they be able to escape the airport unscathed?

Foreword

Hi guys!
You're probably all saying that I already have a ton of stories ongoing and I shouldn't add another one to the pile

I'm digging myself a hole for lack of updates for this story, right?

So I decided I'll be updating this once a week to not disappoint you all.

Bear with me as I write this story, I'm trying a very different plot I've never tried!  
coded by aleric | client: Criticisms are ALWAYS welcome

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Buddygooo #1
Chapter 17: Momo just died like that?! She did love Nayeon though. She's just too obsessed. I'm glad everything's fine
twcnc1101 #2
Chapter 11: HOLY I THOUGHT NAYEON'S EX WAS JY (yes im only reading this now im sorry)
Satzudaughter
#3
This is wonderful, a masterpiece indeed, i enjoyed it so much thank u author nim...glad i read these!!
vogue_kpop
#4
Chapter 17: SUCH A MASTERPIECE!!!!
dkdldb #5
Chapter 17: Really glad i checked this out
dubuislife
#6
I'm glad I read this. Definitely worth the time!
hoe4rose
#7
I wasn't expecting that. I found this story under the recommendations and I'm glad I checked it out. The story is well-written and kept me on edge. I felt every emotion of each character and you, as an author delivered it well. I also love how you portray Momo in this story, it's quite refreshing to see her in a different light. Did I mention that Minayeon is one of my fav ships even though they're tragic irl? :(

Anyways, thank you for creating this story. I'll be checking more of your works.

^^
skye324 #8
Chapter 17: So in love with these two pairings here and both have their own chemistry, Minayeon + Satzu makes the best combination xD. I like seeing Mina being so protective to Nayeon and the feelings are just awwww <3 hope can read some more minayeon fics from you, i really like the character setting here. Thanks for writing this <3
bpiya_
#9
Chapter 17: Oh my god. I read this story in one sitting, literally. I didn't get up even once, im just here on a chair with the laptop on the dining table, I didn't drink water, didn't take my eyes off the screen, anything, the whole time. I freaking loved this oh my god. For the whole story I was like "oh my god how are they so calm" BECAUSE ADMIT IT NO REAL AVERAGE PERSON WOULD BE CALM IN THIS TYPE OF SITUATION. Mina is an exception here, cause she's not an average person anymore with what she went through with momo, but TZUYU AND SANA AND NAYEON? AND DON'T EVEN START WITH NARA. Like if i was Sana, just a normal person who was on a vacation who was suddenly involved in two people's relationship problem that escalated to bombing a huge airport resulting in several hundreds possibly thousands of deaths, then oh my god you cannot believe the immense fear I would feel. And sana and nayeon were so freaking brave to leave that secret safe room i swear, if i was them i probably wouldnt be able to take one step out of the room... but then again they were doing it for someone they love so idk. And Nara. oh my god. if i was nara i wud just silently cry and stay quiet the whole time, but my god. anyway this was AMAZING even though you said this wasnt your forte. I don't usually read this genre but omgisjofidshfoisdhfiojsdiof also aaaaa im slightly sad that there wasn't more background on tzuyu and sana. Like there wasn't more explanation about their backstory, idk just i wanted to get to know them more as chars but that isn't the focus of the story so oh well. Tzuyu seemed really interesting what with her knowledge of guns, and also dat black belt, and we got literally zero on sana's background story except for the fact that she's bestfriends with tzuyu and she's been in multiple relationships and she made tzuyu suffer for five years lmao. But oh well... i still love this omggggggg i guess the story is mostly focusing only on this event in their lives, and characters are always my favorite parts of stories so don't mind me ranting about wanting to know more about the characters lol. That didn't make me love this story any less aaaaa. Also, at the part where nayeon said that speech to momo in her grave, and mina said she doesnt even deserve half of that, I have to admit I agreed with mina at that point. BUT when it came to the part when it finally told what happened at the day nayeon shot the gun (also I couldn't stop laughing, i mean i know i shouldn't but i cant help but laugh when it got revealed that nayeon shot mina's shoulder instead cause lmao at that scene i was thinking "whoa nayeon's so cool" but now i know what actually happened lol. im sORRY FOR LAUGHING MINA, BUT EVEN IF I WAS IN YOUR SITUATION DON'T WORRY I WOULD STILL LAUGH EVEN THO I GOT MY SHOULDER SHOT CAUSE IDK I JUS FIND IT FUNNY IDK??? AAA) anyway when it came to that part, I actually cried when it showed momo's final actions and moments of saying sorry. It just... idk the whole story momo was portrayed as "evil" or sth but yeah I agree with nayeon's speech when I saw that part, she just needed guidance :c I felt so sad imagining the emotions she must've been going through in her last moments, probably got hit with realization and regret like a ton of bricks and i just feel so bad and sad for her AGHHH MOMOOOO ;; and i can just imagine and feel the emotion and sadness and regret she's feeling and regretting everything, IDK MAYBE THATS NOT HOW U PICTURED IT BUT IDKKK I JUST FEEL LIKE THAT'S PROBABLY WHAT SHE WENT THROUGH AND I FEEL SO SADDDDD ASIJAOIDJASOJDIO i wish momo didn't have to go through everything like that :c that way the people at the airport wouldnt have died too and mina and nayeon wudent go through this too and sana and tzuyu wudent go through all that too and nara wudent be scarred with this incident but then again sana and tzuyu probs wudent have confessed to each other, wudent have met nayeon and mina, their friendships wudent be formed, nara wudent meet tzuyu, mina and nayeon wudent be reunited.... so now idk if its better this way or if momo had guidance... i feel bad for de ppl but at the same time the four wudent meet.... but then momo wudent have had a miserable life and ppl wudent have died.. but the four wudent have met.... AGH I DUNNO WUTEVER. WUTEVER THIS WAS AN AMAZING STORY SIOFIOSDJFOSDIJ I LOVE THIS I SHALL CHECK YOUR PROFILE FOR OTHER STORIES NOW. BUT I TEND TO ROAM THE SITE LIKE A NOMAD AND GO AROUND AUTHORS AND SOMETIMES IN THE MIDDLE OF A CONVERSATION WOULD LEAVE SOMEONE HANGING AND REMEMBER TOO LATE THAT I HAD A CONVERSATION SO I HAVE NO IDEA IF ILL BE ABLE TO READ ALL YOUR STORIES CAUSE I MIGHT FORGET LOL. (wow i just realized im like a playgirl but in like story reader version. i dont understand what im saying)

OKAY BYE I LOVED THIS STORY SO MUCH ALSO IT MADE ME AWARE OF THE DANGERS OF THE WORLD LOL?? AND I LOVE U AUTHOR FOR MAKING THIS STORY. Also I hope that the reader that said that they'd stop reading if u killed off their fave char didn't force u into saving tzuyu or something? I mean I definitely wudent like it if tzuyu died and im definitely happy she survived cause i dunno i just feel a bit bad reading a real person's death and imagining it, like i feel like im trying to will it to happen, but id never abandon this story cus i love this and i hope u didnt get forced to save her or sumthing? but LOL im not saying u actually wanted her dead, just dat i hope that reader didn't bother u to the point of changing such a major part in ur story? i dun even understand myself anymore THIS STORY IS THE CAUSE OF ME GOING INSANE


nah jk i love u author i love this story it made me go thru squealing crying and getting angry (at situations nut u) and realizing things and yey i love this. also i find it really amusing how there were parts when the atmosphere was serious and stuff, then BOOM fluff lmao. okay this comment is getting too long im ranting too much I LOVE THIS STORY IM PUTTING ALL MY LOVE INTO THESE SENTENCE CAUSE I CANT EXPRESS HOW MUCH I LOVE IT IN WORDS SO LEMME COMMUNICATE MY LOVE FOR THIS STORY TO YOU TELEPATHICALLY. FEEL MY FEELINGS.

okay ill stop. i lub dis story

also i read tha whole authors note gib me a cookie huehue im so hungry rn but im too lazy to get up and get fud.

OH WAIT I REREAD THE AUTHORS NOTE IN CASE I MISSED AND FORGOT SOMETHINGS I WANTED TO REPLY TO IN THE MIDST OF ME RANTING, AND OMG POSSIBILITY OF SEQUEL? PLEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASE. AND A LIGHTER AND FLUFFY ONE PLEASE LMAO THAT MAYBE CUD FOCUS ON THE CHARACTERS? ALSO Y DID U FEEL LIKE IT WAS HEADING TOWARDS A TERRIBLE END, IT WAS WONDERFUL THE WHOLE JOURNEY THROUGH LOL. also dont make ur main goal making us happy cus sumtimes that stops authors from exploring their limits, ive witnessed it :c writers shud make themselves happy, especially writers here cause they're doing all this fOR FREE. liek bish i cant even motivate myself to write a story even if u paid me a hundred bucks lol... i mean. maybe...

(LOL OF COURSE ID DO IT FOR A HUNDRED BUCKS BUT THAT ISNT THE POINT)

anyway i really should end this comment lmao OKAY BYE I LOVE U ATHOR FOR WRITING THIS STORY I LOVE THIS STORY AND OH MY GOD IM ALONE ITS NIGHT AND I JUST SAW SOMETHING AT THE CORNER OF MY EYE SO IM TYPING REALLY FAST TO END THIS AND GO HIDE AT MY ROOM WHERE EBRYONE ELSE IS SO BYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE I LOVED THIS