Eggs?

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drabble, 3.3kish words, based on the prompt given by ChoiGiGi ( won't reveal it, read to find out :3 )

warnings: cringe, cringe, and lame cringe ahead 

 

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BlingZumie
#1
Chapter 1: I love rereading it :3
DolphinWorld
1992 streak #2
Chapter 1: OMG! This was so damn adorable. They were both so cute, esp Onew. I really enjoyed reading this.
vicistar #3
Chapter 1: Cute <33333
rusticaura
#4
Chapter 1: This was so funny! I was rolling with laughter every time something went wrong with Jonghyun doing the chores and how something went wrong "magically" like overflowing trash hehe this fic was so overboard but perfect lol. i also like how you didn't go with cliche jinki like @shinyan mentions! and the best part- all the cuteness and funniness has a msg hidden that "you should do your work on time and never become an obstacle for others" when jinki becomes a kid who keeps dirtying the home and jonghyun pushes his chores to future he realizes how hard is for him and also realize how hard is for grownup jinki because of him. in the end jonghyun tries to change and learns true value of his bf hehe. really good one <3
shinyan #5
"...he wanted him back, his completely grown glory, all those cuddles and embraces, his deep, gentle voice soothing him whenever he was so close to losing his mind (sobs, like now). He wanted Jinki back, who would take care of him, spoil him, please him, be responsible for both of them. He wanted him back, even if it meant he would have to accept defeat, accept that he was the laziest, clumsiest bum in the universe and let Jinki do everything."

This. Was. Adorable. Also, as that quote perfectly captured, I really like how you didn't go with the cliché of Jinki being the clumsy, bumbling one, and instead had him as the responsible grown-up one here. It was really nice, and I love the dynamic of this jongyu pair. ^^ Very sweet fic~
ChoiGiGi
#6
love love love love love love
cassiejoyz #7
Chapter 1: *squeals* that is so cute ^^
cute-little-oppas
#8
Chapter 1: Omggggg
This was so adorable TT^TT
Jini is so cute and poor jjong lol
Ahhh seriously this was so cute ♡♡
onewfan
#9
Chapter 1: That was adorable. Write more cute stories like this.
Hyuuga_Heibe
#10
Chapter 1: Ahahaha.. Some random things like this, really suit for the hectic days.. It's cute.. Really cute ^.^