Chapter 1: i'm really impressed! i kept getting chills as i read this T_T i love this so much it's much more canon than i could've asked for! this is the first ever exo fic written in chinese that i've read and now it's making me consider going on a hunt for more.

Chapter 2: Can someone hug tao

Preferably sehun

Chapter 2: ON SECOND THOUGHT I WISHED I NEVER READ THIS BC THIS WAS SO CLOSE TO CANON I JUST------- WHY

Chapter 2: *aching sob* *holds chest* you finally translated into english and i---------

i get sad abt chinaline a lot like a real lot. not bc they left exo. it's bc the reality that we won't see them together again agagshsjdjsjdkdkd

TAOOOOOOOOOO *SCREAMS AT SEHUN TO VISIT*

Chapter 2: Can we have a sequel plz.. this is soo beautiful. !!!

Chapter 2: omg this is canon and this hurt me T____________________________T WHY DID U DO THIS
and this is really beautifull written. i like how you named the chapter, it feels incomplete and immediately caught my eye
i'm not super fluent in chinese but the first chapter especially gets me ;; it's so poetic, especially the last letter
世勋啊，
谢谢你，对不起，我爱你。
the way he address sehun in the chinese version has a soft intimacy to it <3
both versions are so well-written TvT <3 i can't wait to read more, thank you for writing this!!