Promise

Description

Keeping her promise just seems impossible when Jeon Jungkook comes into the scene.

Foreword

The first time she noticed him was way back when they were still in middle school. It was their first day and he stood out to her like a lone yellow ball in between a group of black ones. 

“That’s love,” her best friend, Eunha, once said when she told her everything about her fascination toward the boy.

“I’m not sure,” she answers.

I just noticed that almost every reader of 'Only You' hated Jungkook for his character in the story. I sincerely apologize for it. I just made him like that to make the story more interesting. So, as to make up for it, here's a oneshot where Jungkook's not an annoying brat. Enjoy and leave a comment if you can. I'd like to know what you think of this random idea that I just had to share with all of you. :)

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syuhaila #1
Chapter 1: love it
ohchouchou #2
Chapter 1: See? Dynamic!

Part of me is sad because I really want to see how their friendship blooms and another part of me is quite ecstatic at the fact that they know the other exists and their worlds have clashed.

This is beautifully written! There's so much to look forward to in your stories because they're so long and grammar isn't something that detracts from expressions.

Specifically in this work of yours, I love how shy and awkward Yuju is around JK and how confident and sociable JK is around everyone and how they seemed to fit the mold of polar opposites in a sense. These opposites attracted and the way they interacted made me swoon. Yuju's cute escape was a scene that made me smile a lot.

I think what makes this story work so effectively is that Yuju's affection makes the reader witnessing JK through her eyes worthy of her affection. Yuju is so finely written that you witness her mistakes and her forgetfulness and her little quirks and think "ah, that's how she is" and accept it fully. She's so cute. I love her especially. Thanks for writing this adorable yukook friendship. It's bomb yo!
Magic_blue #3
Im so excited you wrote about Yukook again (its Very long but excellent). After read it Im so happy for Yuna when finally he got close to the guy she like. It' s like when you decided thats its enough to see him from a far but it turned out wanting more when accidentally have a chance to get close to him. Its so cute and natural...
And about Jungkook in Only You ..you really dont need to apologize, you can write as you like since its for fun and that s also my purpose reading fanfiction...
Ssarah060 #4
Chapter 1: Wow...I noticed that Yuna didn't talk properly with Jungkook AT ALL in this fanfic and that's what makes it hilarious. Good job.
P.S I didn't find Jungkook irritating at all... I actually think that he might be like that in real life...especially towards his hyungs.
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