Flight Log: Departure

Description

0308 Things weren't supposed to be like this

Foreword

Hey Ya'll! 

So I don't know if I told you all this but I was inspired by the Flight Log:Departure trailer that I had a story idea from it. I even created a video trailer, however it took me a long time to finally finish writing it. But, the story is short and I'm pretty sure not many people will like it. Whatever though. I decided to finish it short and submit it for my class assignment which I haven't done yet so you all get to see it first! yay! I really hope you at least enjoy it. 

Thank you!

-always0nancy

 

01/29

Hey Reader!

So I've edited the story more and hopefully it's a little better. I still have the previous version up but the edited one is set to be a little more vague so that it gives a better sense of making the readers question what's happening. Well at least that's what I hope. You don't have to read both but it'd be nice to have your inputs on the stories. This is for my writing class which is due this Tuesday so the edited one is the last of it and I'm turning it in like that. 

 

Thank you!

-always0nancy

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proudjbstan
#1
Chapter 1: wow...such an amazing story that had me in tears...when are you going to continue it? this seems promising