Chasing Perfection

Description

In a brief moment of anger, they fall apart and Jinyoung waits for the day Jaebum returns to him. 

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Foreword

Hey everyone! This is my first fic for GOT7 even though I've been a fan since late 2014. I haven't written in about 4-5 years so I'm definitely rusty. The tenses may get a little confusing since I switched from present tense to past during the scenes that featured memories/flashbacks, etc.

Hopefully despite all those shortcomsings, you all still enjoy it! ^^

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riko4567 #1
Chapter 1: Unashamed at the fact that i teared up throughout certain points of the story xD i love this <3
softyoonie #2
i love your writing so much omg!!!! the dialogues.. jinyoung's thoughts.. even for someone who's never been in a relationship, i could feel the hURT. also 2jae ahhshdj i could never stand 2jae as anything other than platonic,, but the way you tell their story, i almost wish they'd stay together. but i'm relieved jjp is still the endgame tho (they aRE, AREN'T THEY?). agshdj idk why i'm rambling i just wanna say thank you so much for writing this!!!! <3
MrDumbbell012 #3
Chapter 1: This story deserves more recognition that what it got!!! I swear this gonna be one of my fav JJP fanfic TT.TT they way you describe Jinyoung's feelings is so heartfelt that I can feel it too...beautiful fanfic it is!
suga_baby #4
Chapter 1: whatt???? i thought this was going to be a 2jae.
demayunho #5
Chapter 1: Omygoooddd... i hate youuuu for making my emotion so wreck T___T and I want sequeell.. I wanna know what happened when jinyoung call jaebum... aaaakkkhhhh...
alfsecret #6
This is my second time to read your story author nim :3
And my heart still beating so fast because i'm excited for this story :3
I love it author nim :3
Don't you want to make a short sequel to tell us about how jinyoung and jaebum meet again? '-'
FeatherFall #7
Chapter 1: Crap, I am an emotional wreck right now, and I'm not even that mich of a fan of Got7. I literally started listening to their songs days ago. I just came here because I really liked your Shinee work and, man, this got me so emotionally unstable. Great work! I really loved it! *cries*
immutable #8
Chapter 1: OMG I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!
EEEEEEEEPPPP I WANT TO SCREAM!!!!!
Mmakeu #9
Chapter 1: Ahh my hearteuㅠㅠ
Sequel please:( i need to know why Jinyoung leaving Jaebum at first, and how was Jebum's reaction when Jinyoung called him after he broke up with Youngjae and how they made upㅠㅠ
alfsecret #10
Chapter 1: Oh my God! It really stirs my emotion! You make me melt because jb's romantic movement/?, you make me -almost- cry because jbjr's condition, and you make me laugh because of jack's antics xD Please make a sequel author-nim ><
You still didn't tell us exactly about 'what makes them drifted apart' :'
I'm curious about how they come back together ><
Please author-nim >< sequel juseyoo
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