Breaking Barriers

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Description

Nichkhun has the highest grades of the senior class and is admired by all, but the only thing he's missing is community service hours. The school counselor, who wanted him to get into the best university, advised him to tutor the remedial classes for lower grades. 

Amongst the remedial class full of delinquents is Woo Jiho, one of the rowdiest sophomores in the group. Nichkhun already has a tough time adjusting to this environment full of stubborn lower classmen, but Jiho just doesn't stop pestering him.

 How will he learn to control Jiho? Or is there more behind Jiho's story than he lets off?

 

Foreword

A story where a close minded, scholarly Nichkhun falls in too deep for the rowdy Jiho. 

And Jiho can't help but fall with him.

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Chapter 3 of Breaking Barriers is up after my hiatus! Be sure to check it out

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babikhun
#1
Chapter 1: Rereading again and I miss it, please don't leave it
Kwonie88
#2
Chapter 1: Ok
Aidemstarz
#3
Chapter 4: Wow, this has been here for a month and I'm just now reading it! Lol. Yay, Jiho and Seungjae have a new family :)
blockb_love #4
Chapter 4: Good for them! Glad that his disgusting father is behind bars now. That's where he should be. I'm so excited for Jiho's new home!!! These past few chapters were so sad and your descriptions really brought a cloud around all the characters. Now that he has a new life, it feels like the story has become physically brighter. I don't know how you managed to do that but you just did. The perspective shift was also a good idea, imo at least. It was important to have Nichkhun and Jiho's backstories and ideas from their own POVs first before taking this approach, so I'm glad you made that choice. Can't wait for the next chapter! I'm also eagerly waiting for Hit The Stage. I love it!
blockb_love #5
Chapter 3: That back story was seriously intense. I viewed Jiho as this crazy guy who doesn't care about anyone, but you did drop some clues that some things weren't right, especially in the previous chapter. But hold on...his father stabbed him? That's honestly disgusting....I really don't know how a father could do that no matter what the circumstances are. I assume Nichkhun is going to help a lot though! Which is good. I wonder what he's going to do....he is very smart.
blockb_love #6
Chapter 2: Wow I didn't think Nichkhun would do that to him; he seemed so sweet!! But I guess he was really passionate about his school work. Hm, there is something more to than eye. I have a feeling Jiho is truly a much sweeter person but never had the chance to be. What kind of parents would do that to him? Glad Nichkhun is there as some sort of support. Great job yet again on writing!! You write so well :) It's not too long or too short; just the right, bite-sized amount.
blockb_love #7
Chapter 1: I really like how you set up the contrast between Nichkhun and Jiho as rivals so far. The way you described even their subtle actions allowed me to envision the scene. It was a fight with dialogue but I was able to imagine just how their faces looked like in that moment. Even if the scenes itself are focused on this gloomy rivalry, the way you throw in comedic remarks is refreshing! It makes the story even more enjoyable.
babikhun
#8
Chapter 3: so happy this is finally working, but it's very sad chapter :( poor jiho suffering with his father like that. How can a parent be this awfull to their own child, so sad... I hope khunnie can help with the doctor and make things right for the boys.
cellyne
#9
Chapter 3: Oh gish... Hiw can a father hurt his son like that??!! A father should be the ine protecting his son not hurting him...

I like jiho's character... A tough person outside but a softie inside... There isn't much of a guy i know that arr softies..

I just hope that jiho's life would get better and khun would help him through it..
I'm starting feel that jiho and khun are getting closer oh and hopeful khun's family would take them in...khun's family is generous anyways..
cellyne
#10
Chapter 2: Oh my gosh khun... You're such a softie!!
I like the part where khun is watching jiho and jae while eating.. I kinda picture it in slow motionand its really heart-warming...