He Who Lies

Description

Jinki is a nerdy, poor student who sells to make ends meet. Taemin is his troubled rich client who can't get over him. And Kibum is Jinki's close friend who loves him more than he wishes.

It's a story of pain and redemption, finding out more about yourself and healing. 


Warning: language, suicidal thoughts, ual situations, references to violence and self-harm (brief).

 

Foreword

Hello readers! I haven't posted anything for a while, and I hope you guys like the story. As always, susbscribe if you enjoy it, and share your thoughts. Thank you~ L.

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HikariLee
#1
Chapter 24: I'm Reading this history again and what can I say, my life has been through some hardship in the love department... And let me tell you that now I feel this history so personal, it's incredible, this last chapter hit Right in my feelings...

You have an amazing talent to make the reader really FEEL this history!!
Zeeebunny #2
Chapter 24: you write so .. beautifully. It's amazing.. the description, your style and emotions.. they are all more than just amazing. You write in such a way that I can actually feel what the character is feeling. It's really an art and you're like a master of it. I just saw this update.. although I waited for this for months but I was unaware that you updated.. This is my fav OnTae story ever. you're so good in writing and I really respect it ❤ TAke care plz .. have a good day/night ?
melagoyangi #3
Chapter 21: I’m sitting in a car, we’ ve travelled since early morning almost without a break. I only just caught up with the note you left for your readers last december and I wanted to thank you for all the beautiful words. Tears welled up but I held back crying bc my driver wouldn’t understand... I’m grateful if you continue this story. I’m sad about every story that I love that gets abandoned or deleted in the light of what happened. After all, he’s still with us in our hearts, in memories, in stories (fictional or not). I love slow burn and I’m looking forward as to how you will continue this. I have my own personal hopes for the characters obviously but we’ll see! :)
gweboon_bunny #4
Chapter 24: gosh... instead of reading a fanfic.. I more feel like watching a movie.. and I feel really sorry to Kibum... can't wait for the next chap.. I know Jinki love Taemin and it's so complicated.. I still feel sorry for Kibum..
angeljinkii #5
Chapter 24: God, I cried. I don't even what for? Probably Taemin, probably because he still don't have a Kibum in his life or rather he won't let anyone be that for him. By the end of this chapter my heart hurts so so so much, I just can't bring any words to describe the things I am feeling. Ah, even though I understand you are busy and I hope you won't let this story go incomplete because when u didn't update for a long time, I literally tonight that.
HikariLee
#6
How i missed this story!!!!! I was so happy when i saw that you updated it. This chapter was so intense and complicated for both of them. I was kinda upset? Lost? With taemin's decision but that ending hurt me so much!!!!! :/ I want to hug them so bad. I hope we can know how is kibum doing in the next chapter!

I'm glad you enjoyed your time in your travel and thanks for not leaving this amazing story! Hope you can post the other stories too, please!!!! Take care
ONTAEinee #7
Chapter 24: I really love this fic it’s so beautiful I love long fics you really put your all in it and I have to thank you for that thank you so much i really like it , I hope Ontae will find they’re way to get back together
Hyuuga_Heibe
#8
Chapter 24: I don't know what to feel..
This is still so... You know, they haven't done yet, they still hold the string..
But I want them to decide, to choose, to be happy with everything.. This's still so touching..
Your words never failed me!! I wish I could make one like yours!!
Zeeebunny #9
Chapter 23: so I just found this story yesterday and after reading not even the half of first chapter I knew I was hooked.. (but I absolutely didn't know that I would actually go crazy over it but eeeh leave it for later).. so I just knew I had to read it all .. I would say that it was the most angsty kinda angst that I have ever red .. my emotions felt like on roller coaster and at some point I understood Jinki too that sometimes it's just easy to shut off your brain and just go wherever the flow leads you.. I so much loved the charaterrization of your story and the way you made them all .. like Human .. with all emotions and their own problems to deal with.. it was rather unique I would say .. never even for once I felt bored despite all long descriptions coz it was deep stuff that i love to read alot rather than some rainbows and unicorns stuff (ofcourse I like it too but everything has just its own appeal) I awfully felt on Taemin's part.. it was heart crushing to be honest the way he was suffering hard and battling with his own self.. while Jinki is so damn delusional of his own feelings that oh God he just knows that how to switch off his emotions sometimes but its okii .. it happens .. and Kibum actually deserves someone who loves him with all his heart for all the efforts the poor being has gone through.. anyways.. Jonghyun's character was so mysterious yet observative .. he speaks in a philosophical way and enjoyed his little conversations alot (it's been too long I know and I'm sorry for that part) an Minho is .. Minho lol ..
long story short.. I loved it so much.. I might say that its the most angsty story that I have ever red but I'm so in love with your writing style .. its beautiful really and you're so talented ♡♡ .. I wish I could read further without a pause lol but that's not possible as there is no further update but it's oki coz I have patience and I'll wait for it .. so I hope that you'll update soon so i can quench my curiosity.. lots of love ♡♡ you did so well and I clearly saw it ♡♡ have a good day ♡♡
AISHKOOK #10
Chapter 16: all the small details and how every single chapter goes awfully well together simply amazes me. i can’t possibly explain how many emotions i had to and continue to go through while reading this book. i love this so much