Sunshine Love

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Jungyeon's handwriting looks like she wrote everything in the dark but she writes Mina love letters anyway.

Foreword

ive written 6 twice fics and 50% of them are highschool aus and i will apologise for NotHING

i love mimo but i also love jungmi and momo has nice handwriting so gotta keep these fics real ya feel??????

anyways stay tuned for 2 part trash B)

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kiddoatheartu #1
Chapter 1: Your interpretation of Jeongyeon on your story is always stupidly in love with Mina. I'm not complaining though but I'm Jeongyeon trash, and I feel sorry for her for being so whipped for Mina that she's basically becoming a complete idiot ?. But nonetheless I find it cute cause it very JeongMi like. Hehe. Thank you so much author-nim for another great story, hope to read another JeongMi fic from you soon or any fic that includes Jeongyeon.
Perfect_shot #2
Chapter 4: Super cute, I really like your writing style.
snowflakes #3
Chapter 4: Damn it, I'm inlove with writing skills. You gave me fluttering feelings all over again for my parents. Ugh, i love my moms!
nojamOppaJEONGYEON #4
Aww this fic is super cute! Dwfinitelwpne of my favs and dare I say best Jeongmi fic!Thank you so much for this author nim! And please make more Jeongmi fic! love ya?
cCyrus123 #5
Chapter 3: This fic got progressively cuter bold Mina is LIFE
bluelyps27 #6
Chapter 1: I'm so glad this fic is completed (because it means I don't have to wait for updates) and even though I've yet to read it all, I can't help but insert my two cents right now.

LOL You have a way with words; very clever. ..."heart palpitating in its bony cage". ha ha ha Many other examples ... in fact, just the whole darn thing. It was a real riot to read.

The only thing I would suggest (and it's a really measly suggestion) is the formatting. Maybe some spacing between the dialogue just so it's easier on the eyes? Do you see how pathetic my constructive criticism is? I can't come up with anything better because the writing itself is very good and I see nothing wrong with it.

You're a very good writer. IIRC, I may have read your other stuff and thought the same, too. Great writing. *checks your other fics* Ahh yes, I've read your Seulrene fics! And now that I've developed a sudden interest in Twice, I can finally get into your other fics. Hooray *jumps for joy*

Thanks so much!

PS. A fellow Aussie! Yippppeeeeeeee ;p
khnagr #7
Chapter 4: Shyshyshy jeong is the cutest aw ;_;
Heartshaker #8
Chapter 1: Lmao Jeongyeon my fav loser ?
gracefuljm #9
Chapter 4: Sweeter than a candy >< hahahaha i can't stop smiling/ laughing XD
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