Mellifluous

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Mellifluous

| mel-lifl-ulous |

(adj.)  a sound that is sweet and smooth, pleasing to hear.

 

 

Her golden rich, honey voice sweetened the night.

He looked for her, intrigued to see her beauty.

She knowingly drew him to her, and yet he was so naive to fall into her trap.

Because little did he know, beauty is dangerous.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Foreword

 

jung yoon-oh x park chaeyoung

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genre: supernatural, dark, fantasy, greek mythology (no romance)

inspired by: an incredible art by Pure-Poison89 and Ariel, The Little Mermaid

started: 12.25.16

words: 5,355

credits to poster/background: KEWL GRAPHICS ⬈ 

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nekotsukiyomi
#1
Chapter 1: I’ve finally taken the time to read this and I must say, this is an absolute masterpiece! I love and enjoy every single moment of it, especially the bond Jaehyun has with his friends. This is a perfect calm before the storm one shot and I was not expecting that ending, i was blown away! I’m not sure if I’m the only one who sensed the foreshadowing when the members say that it’s “the last party on their last day.” The way you portray the sirens and the tragic deaths of the members is what I love about this because 1.) it’s realistic 2.) as the comments say below, it’s not romanticized. I love romance, but once in a while I’ve been looking for something that feels realistic (like how sirens are supposed to be) and not all the time it’s romance, you know? XD as an angst enthusiast (omg I need more light and fluff in my life) you perfectly and magnificently execute the death scene of the members and I’m devasTATed. I’m the type to read while listening to songs, so when I read the siren scene the second time while listening to “Control” by Halsey... Oh gosh Diana I was SHOOOKKK. Like I was already shook for the first time but with the song combined I’m found dead in the ditch LOLOL Seriously thank you, THANK YOU for writing this absolute masterpiece. I never knew I needed this, this is the second story I’ve read from you and honestly flushed all of my stress away. I hope to find more time to read your other stories because you’re definitely one of a kind. I look forward to your second version if you’re still planning to do so, but other than that, I love this siren au so muchhhh and I enjoy it truly! Thank you for working so hard to write this :) much love <3
nekotsukiyomi
#2
Chapter 2: I have not read this yet but I totally understand how it feels to be frustrated at your own stories :( as an author it’s really up to you how you wanted to express your own work so do whatever it takes to put you at ease :) we readers will understand! Take as much time as you need and I hope you don’t feel pressured ToT just like you, I’ve been having so much problems with one of my nctpink stories as well that I did a third attempt because it was that frustrating DX as I’m planning I read this one, I shall look forward and patiently wait for you second version! You can do it! :) <3
alcyonne
#3
Chapter 2: It's a pity you hate it, but then again, it's understandable to sometimes hate your own work when it never comes out as you intended. I know the feels. I'll gladly read the re-written version but as for this one, I do love it! I don't mind it's violent ending because you're right about sirens, they're often romanticised so it can get pretty boring quick. I like the fact you tried to stick to what sirens are meant to be like and the last scene when they surrounded the boat was pretty chilling. I know there's not much romance and don't be pressured to add it, it's not worth it to dampen the quality of the fic because it was slapped on for the sake of it. If you do intend to add more romance in the new version, I'm sure you can tweak the story around a bit to find space for it so it fits. I do like that the suggestive ending as well where Rose was the one that 'saved' Jaehyun. That's interesting, imo. Can even bit a good starting point for a continuation. ANYWAY, here I am rambling again. I love this and I think you did very well! Beautiful work (and story visuals)! xx
ROSEANNEinyourarea
#4
Chapter 1: This siren Au fic is realistic, and I'm glad that you didn't romanticize it much. I liked it that you ended the story with the title and the way you write is descriptive! Love the dark vibe and chilly ending.
Kathys
#5
Chapter 1: Oh how much I love siren aus and I love that you didn't portrayed them like in Little Mermaid but the original vicious creatures. I like the dark vibes of this story, and that they died in the end. It's a little cold-hearted of me but it was realistic like this. But bless you for that tiny bit of romance possibily, it made my heart warm that she saved the prince after all. I enjoyed reading this! ^^
restless_maknae
#6
Chapter 1: Wow, I love this so much! The crew was lovely but I loved Prince Jaehyun the most, he was so cute. *-* I liked the twists and also the fact that it wasn't a typical siren AU. It had an open end but I think it was the best this way. It was nice that you ended the whole story with the title, I didn't expect that. :)
Thank you for sharing your story with us! It was so enjoyable! <3
Sunchild
#7
Chapter 1: Finally got around to reading this! don't worry it was good and unique and tbh I liked it a lot!! and I feel like the cliffhanger left quite a big impression on me and I will probably be thinking about this fic for some time now lol. I really really love your writing!! there were some typos here and there but your writing is so descriptive and vivid, like it's bursting with colors!! I feel like this definitely has potential to become something bigger but it's all up to you!! thank you for writing this!! my jaerose heart is blessed!