Chapter 1: I like the concept of your story quite a lot XD I just found it difficult to believe that a car went 90 mph on a street 0u0... Does Jongin dance on the highway? LOL Also.. if he's deaf.. can he speak? So, he must not have been deaf his entire life? All very interesting, I just wish the story was longer and more in depth :( I will definitely read it again if you ever decide to revamp it XD
But on a positive note, I love how shy Jongin is and I love how forward the OC is XD I would never be able to simply start hanging out with someone street dancing LOL XD I also never saw the car crash coming 0u0 definitely a surprise, but the cute ending is adorable~
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