Daughter of Darkness, Son of Light

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Description

She was the daughter of  the wicked illusionist.

He was the son of the respected wizard.

A fierce competiton is under way- a duel between two mages, Rosé and Jimin,

who have been trained since their childhood.

Eternally bonded by the curse

they are destined to fight each other in a contest.

The game will only finish when someone wins.

When the opponent dies.

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Foreword

hello readers

First of all, I just want to say that I took the story idea from the novel called "The Night Circus". I recommend eveyone to read it. 

It is not an exact copy of the story, that's just wrong, but i took inspiration from the book and it will have a different story than "The Night Circus"

Btw, credits to Erin Morgenstern, who is the author of 'The Night Circus', for coming up for the wonderful novel and for the inspiration. 

 

 

 

Credit for HeyItsBubble and her/his "Nemesis Graphics Shop" for making my cover, the original one before this was done in www.canva.com so yeah, no effort was put into that.

 

 

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rosebae #1
Chapter 3: this is chapter is written so good
BanaWarrior
#2
Chapter 10: I only hope that Rose can grow confident over time. A.k.a she can surpass her traumas. It will take a lot of time and effort, but it's not Impossible, right?
And a New mysterious character! What Jinyong is? What he wants? What is his message? XD haha
Jenduekie #3
Chapter 10: Ouhhh jiyong nice
BanaWarrior
#4
Chapter 9: It's good to see this story comming back. :3
And I'm really happy that Rose is with Ms. Lee. Somewhat Ms.Lee gives me Howl vibes xD hahaha

And about the fighting scenes, I do think this one turned pretty good for a first time. If course it's not perfect, but it's good! :3 Although I don't write much, I had read many many different fighting scenes, and what I can say to help is to always keep in mind the mood. If you want It short and powerful, If you want It dramatic or even if you want It lighthearted, always keep that in mind to adjust the writting to the mood. And I think that in general, fighting scenes should give a good flowing while reading and not be too much descriptive/flowery. I Hope this helps :3
Keep the good work! X3
Marichu2ne1 #5
Chapter 6: Yyayyy they finally met! Can't wait for more
pjmtrash #6
Chapter 6: They finally met yess
ROSEANNEinyourarea
#7
Chapter 6: I squeal when he introduced himself >•< They finally met! The chapter is nice and gets us all excited for next ^-^
ROSEANNEinyourarea
#8
Chapter 5: Too fast Jimin, too fast :(
ROSEANNEinyourarea
#9
Chapter 4: Yay! Rosé can finally live her life freely. I feel like Jimin wouldn't kill her father, it's just not him!
ROSEANNEinyourarea
#10
Chapter 1: I like the way you describe. Slightly short but it's packed.