Chapter 1: Jinki's rabbit like smile and thin eyes - I loved that description XD it was so cute.! Just like jinki :) omg and tae looked freaking adorable waving to Jong with his long sleeve over his hand.
I always get emotional when ontae fight and feel so happy and relived when they get back together.
I really like how its seen through Jong's eyes.
Fantastic job!
Chapter 1: Aww this is so cute! I like the way you wrote it from jjong's pov just overseeing their whole relationship, and when they argued and stopped talking my hearttt T_T.
I thought that this was so sweet and cute. It showed the good, and even the frustrating parts of a relationship, and Jonghyun wasn't even the one in the relationship!
I was surprised that there are so little comments. (i mean, seriously, I love your stories, and just.... yeah!)
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