Passage of Time

Description

Where the river is the passage of time, Naeun is drifting in it, and Jongin is the one left behind.

Son Naeun // Kim Jongin

 

icon credits: mrrchu, yifsn

Foreword

naeun / jongin, g, 234 w, angst

a/n: a small piece at 2am.  has been crossposted to my livejournal @ yimsiwan.

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soeums #1
Chapter 1: this is freaking beautiful. just saying dude, THIS IS WRITING GOALS
tourmaline #2
Chapter 1: WHAT'S WITH ALL THE KAIEUN FICS COMING OUT NOW (i say all but there's really only been two new ones rip). at first i was drawn in by the summary (which is beautifully worded btw) but then i glanced down at the foreword and was confused bc you wrote "20 w" haha. i think you meant 200?

this is short but really lovely! the imagery is really nice (although i have to admit i was slightly put off by "her white dress floating on top of the water" bc wouldn't she basically be then??) and i really liked the use of the river/rain as a metaphor. i'm also a huge fan of the parenthesis thing and it really made an impact for me (especially the last sentence).

i'm pretty sure this is about a separation of sort (is jongin like dead or something) but honestly idek anymore. a year w/o english has just made me unable to critically think about anything lol

all in all, nice story!! i do hope you write more c:
mariyakristinuh #3
Chapter 1: Oh... ??? Please elaborate this one please please. It's too... Vague? KaiEun <3 TT
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