A Long Story for Our Short Lives

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Two boys lied underneath a tree, exhausted after playing and running around the field. No words were coming from their mouth except their ragged breath. After some time, the taller one sat up and stared at the smaller one.

 

"Would you promise me that you will be with me forever? Would you like spending your eternity with me?"

"Yes, I will be gladly spending our eternity together. I want to spend my forever only with you."

 

At the age of 10, they made a promise and the sun witnessed it all.

Foreword

Annyeonghaseyo~~~

This is my first story of kyuwook hehehe :] please do read it and give a lot of love! English is not my mother tounge so some grammar error could be found every here and there, sorry about that! :(

Comments and questions are very much welcomed!! :D

Enjoy!

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jesyuchiha #1
Chapter 5: Por favor acrualiza rapido
rainloverdreamz #2
Chapter 4: Hey nice going with the fic. Also Kyuhyun's pet name is gaemkyu but it sounds just like kim kyu, I heard Heechul calling him that once and I was like ..what kim kyu??? Oh no its gaemkyu :p :p sometime I wonder if that is intentional or not :p waiting for the update.
lovekyuwook #3
Chapter 3: "because Kyuhyun insisted that he needed Wookie’s caressing when he was sick—yeah right, sick your , said Ahra and Heechul"
HAHAHAHAHAHa I love this line! XD
ryeonggunathanlixu #4
Chapter 3: Wow...cute... I love kyu clingy with wook...
Mishtique #5
Chapter 3: I really like this story, its so happy it brightens my day
1sailorjupiter #6
Chapter 1: This chapter was very cute, with the boys as children promising to stay together forever. I'm interested in seeing where you go with this story. I also like some of the detail you add into it. I actually stopped reading for a moment when you mentioned that they had claimed a tree as their own because as children, my brother and I plus our two neighborhood friends (one of the guys I'm still friends with online after all these years even) had a tree with called our house. Of course, it belonged to a neighbor and she never liked us playing on her property, but we did anyway. Lol! But that seemed so real to me! Some people have a knack for knowing the right kind of details that add to a story and some don't. You seem to have a talent for storytelling. I hope you continue to write more.
someday1965 #7
Chapter 1: Love it!! I hope they keep true to their word.
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