This was very cute ! You managed to make the "fall on each other" part not cheesy, nor cliché, surprisingly. The writing style is easy to read, it goes with the flow and the mood of the story. I'm looking forward to the next part !
Chapter 1: Where's the next part?? I demand to know what happens next. Lmao this was so good though. I was smiling like an idiot throughout the whole thing. And Jinki- the sly, old leader. He knows what's up. Tbh, jjong and taemin are so painfully obvious about their feelings for each other that any random stranger could tell that they're in love. Anyway keep up the great work. I'll be eagerly awaiting the next part! <333
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