Painting Memories

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It was the same day, when Baekhyun lost his purpose to live and Hong Nari lost her memories. He thought their past would stay concealed forever but that one damned artwork ruined it all.

 

 

Vision is art of seeing what is invisible to others.

 

“There are painters who transform the sun to a yellow spot, but there are others who, with the help of their art and their intelligence, transform a yellow spot into sun." ~Pablo Picasso

 

Prologue : 

"But, I miss you! Why did you have to leave before me?" Baekhyun complained as he talked to his lover, Hong Nari over the phone. He knew she wasn't going to give him a proper response, so he continued, "How's England? I heard it's really cold."

"Yup, like right now, I'm freezing to death." He could almost hear and feel her shivering in the cold. 

"Why don't you have warm coffee? Huh, since your Baekkie isn't there to make you one?" He cooed and smiled. Hong Nari on the other side of the phone, laughed out loud. 

"I see a coffee shop, but it is at the other side of the road. I really don't want to walk more." Baekhyun chuckled and held his cell phone against his shoulder because he was too busy lighting the candle on their fifth anniversary cake. 

"You have your laptop with you?" Baekhyun asked. He had a surprise ready for her. 

"Yeah, it's with me on the table." Baekhyun assumed that she was sitting by the window. "Turn it on, baby. Open FaceTime." Hong Nari protested at first but did as she was told because she was curious as hell. The screen opened to reveal his girlfriend. It looked like it was snowing outside.

He hid the cake and let her see his face. "What?" Nari said in a sour voice but she was too happy to see him.

"This won't work, go get some coffee. Leave the laptop here, so, I can watch you." Baekhyun didn't even know what he was saying. He could see a coffee shop from his screen and it wasn't far. She just had to cross the road. "Buy a cake too." 

"You want me to leave the laptop here?"

"Yah, let staff take care of that? Can't you even do that?" Nari pouted but nodded her head, "You really want me to spend my money, eh." Baekhyun saw she waved at someone, "Mira eonnie! Can you look after this!?" Baekhyun watched patiently before she turned her attention back to the screen. 

"Aish, be right back." Baekhyun laughed a little and  watched as she got up to get coffee. Baekhyun saw her crossing the road... He watched and smiled through the screen.

It was only a few minutes later that she emerged from the coffee shop. Baekhyun had the cake ready and he was excited to wish her... It happened in few moments. Baekhyun's jaw dropped open and he started screaming his head off. 

Nari carelessly, with the coffee and cake in her hand was crossing the snowy road. There was honking, and truck hit her... She disappeared. 

 

Foreword

Huge shoutout to 'citrusbee' for giving my brain a head start, I was greatly inspired by her story and after some major thinking, I devopled the story! As you have guessed it lol, it's going to be angsty about past lovers. I won't say more :) I'll try to make it to 5 chapters. Baekhyun x OC.

I got my story reviewed and advertised, please check out the shop below; it's cute and nice and all. I'll drop some comments of the reviewer... 

I really enjoyed the story, I probably will continue reading it when I'm able to.  And I don't say that about all the stories I review!  You have a very nice story, and I can't wait to see it being featured on AFF!

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I got this reviewed by  this Heart, Mind and Seoul Review shop, so please check them out.

I got 85/95 and thats a pretty good score.

"Your description is quite short, only two sentences long, which is a good thing because you’re not dragging it out by giving away too much information, yet at the same time you’re giving enough to draw your readers in.

The use of a prologue is very effective too - you’ve given your readers a brief background story of the main characters, which means you don’t need to spend as long trying to tell that story within the actual chapters. From the short prologue, a lot is learnt about the characters and the story, well done!"

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Faryoula
#1
Chapter 4: I really like the story it's new
Baekhyuniieislove
#2
Chapter 4: Is a painting of them kissing or something similar to that? I am thoroughly baffled because it that this is the second last chapter. I wish you didn't have to end it too soon. There's still so much. But besides that, I am super looking forward to whats the last chapter going to be like and how you'll end it. I know yoi will do a great job *thumbs up* I hope you'll write more Baekyeon stories in the future! Because you're one of the best baekyeon authors out there.

Fighting author-nim!!!
lulu_1320 #3
nice chapter ^^
anitaklr24
#4
Chapter 4: Great chapter! Maybe Baekhyun and Nari are in the paint.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Hugs ^^,
Maysaa55 #5
Chapter 4: Their love is real but the life is soooooooo crul T.T I just can't stand this really!!! What if, what if he is forced to let her go again? What if she isn't remembering??? I think it's a photo of their younger selfs or something she used to be .... Anyway thank you for updating and I'm waiting patiently for the next update^^
ayemwhyyyy #6
Chapter 4: That last line though! My feels, I can't!
Baekhyuniieislove
#7
Chapter 3: This is my new favorite story on this site! I love Baekhyun so much so I'm always out for searching more fanfics and I always end up readings yours~ kekek you're the best baekhyun writer.
EXOLOVERYEHET
#8
Chapter 3: Nice story ^^