Deep Within

Description

What do you see when you can't see? How deep can you go when you don't have the most important sense to break all the barriers? Kyuhyun's view will change after realizing how comfortable it is to be with someone who doesn't know how you look, and only sees you for what you really are. The strange sense of closeness with someone who will never see the look in your eyes, the color of your skin, but sees the honesty in your words and the warmth of your soul.

Foreword

Okay, I should definitely be studying or just finishing another chapter for my other story, but after a conversation with my boss this cheesiness popped out, and I couldn't refuse it. I apologize in advance, this is so not me. I'm getting older and cheesier. .My.Life.

Just for the record - My final project in highschool was about blind people, so some of these sensations my main character describes are pretty accurate, just to satisfy your curiosity.

Any similarities with life or death are strictly a coincidence. And, let's get on with the show ;)

 

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lulu8891 #1
Chapter 1: I'm always interested in this kind of stories :)
I've been in contact with some people with disabilities, but the power they have amazes me every time, the ultimatly sensitive sences and the amazingly pure hearts they have, it's like they are on another level, a level we don't know is there unless we come across them, to let them open our hearts to the truth around us.
Thanks for sharing this and happy borthday, i know it's late, but late is better than never being there :)
I enjoyed reading every word thanks to you, and it's been a while since i came across something nice like this.
gaemaker #2
Chapter 1: Wow. Totally different experience with someone who can't see but can see everything inside out! This amazing! I was moved by the sensitivity of the girl. .
Ayakorea #3
Chapter 1: It is really cute and heartwarming ,I hope u make it a long story. Fighting.happy birthday
kiddcrazy #4
Chapter 1: Wow....
This was so beautiful... the conversations felt so real and so sweet... I was so focused on what was happening
I loved the intimacy
Mirai05 #5
Chapter 1: This is amazingly written. Did u do a research about blindness and the senses people who can't see experiencing? It is more passionate and intimate when the female MC feel kyu solely depends on her senses.. no worries, it's not cheesy much but romantic. Love it.
Mirai05 #6
Sounds like a good plot!
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