Faulty Promise

Description

You shouldn't make promises you can't keep. At least not to wrong people, like Do Kyungsoo. Otherwise, you will have to pay, because when Kyungsoo sets his eyes on something, it's his till death... Or even longer?

Foreword

At first, Do Kyungsoo was one fine man full of warmth, courtesy and charm. Was. It's like after knowing him better, unfolding his every layer you start hating him as much as you loved him.

 

"Even when I die, I'll still remain in your memory, and you'll remain in my heart."

 

One shot's playlist:

Swan Lake (Music Box)

Pan's Labirynth Lullaby

Silent Hill Promise

 

Word count: 8631

 

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This story is a pure fiction. I do not own EXO, places or the pictures used to make the posters. So all the copyrights belongs to their rightful owners.

 

My first attempt to write 'dark', 'horror-ish' or 'demonic' so I hope it ended quite well ^^

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vividimole #1
Chapter 1: The protagonist was so naive it hurt. She learned her lesson the hard way and it's a pity really, but everyone is responsible for their actions. Life is nothing but choices.

Interesting read :)
vividimole #2
Just remembered I have this story bookmarked for months! Really intriguing description, will definitely read in the morning :)
_aapropaty_ #3
Chapter 1: Nice....... But how did he die?
allforkyungsoo #4
Chapter 1: A nicely conveyed message through a one shot! Its meaningful and deep :))
2yLight #5
Chapter 1: daebak!!
the chill...
Exoright #6
Chapter 1: Goodness 0_0
What did I just read?
I was screaming at Mina to be honest half of the time...
I am just glad that I read this while it's day!
I really want to smack Mina so hard, first of all she was so understanding when he told her that his girlfriend was murdered and than she was like he is so possessive 'gal you should she that coming, I mean sure, you don't judge anybody because their girlfriend was murdered but you kind of get alert, right? and what you did? '
He had issues and it was clear from the start and if you don't want to deal with people with those kind of issues than you are the one at fault...


This story was awesome, surely you conveyed the message efficiently, Mina was like every other teenage gal out there who happens to do same kind of mistakes, Mina was desperate, couldn't decide what she wants and well than the consequences.
Goodjob author :)
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