The Times

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What if you were given the power to travel back to the past? Would you try to change things?

Maybe you’ll work harder for your exams; spend more time with your family; or confess to the guy you had a crush on.

But for Bomi, she was going to do something different.

She was going to make sure she wasn’t going to fall in love with that one guy.

She was going to make sure she didn’t meet him.

Foreword

...I think I'll miss you even if we never met.
 

Comments and upvotes are greatly appreciated :)

 

 

Won 2nd Place in War and Peace Writing Contest 


Won 3rd place in  𝓣𝓱𝓮 𝓜𝔂𝓼𝓽𝓮𝓻𝔂 𝓸𝓯 𝓛𝓲𝓯𝓮 🆆🆁🅸🆃🅸🅽🅶 🅲🅾🅽🆃🅴🆂🆃

 

Entering in Black Rose Writing Contest

 

 

Prompts:
"I just want you to know, when I picture myself happy, it's with you."
“Don’t ever let anyone tell you giving up is easy. Giving up is the hardest thing I ever had to do.”

 

Credits to Ƹ̴Ӂ̴Ʒ ILaria Ƹ̴Ӂ̴Ʒ Multi shop for the review :)


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purplejoch #1
new subscriber here
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Congratulations
DGNA_Forever #3
Chapter 3: It's interesting how this turned out, with some things ending up good, while other things couldn't be changed. I liked that. Also, the fact that they got a second chance, without reliving the pain, was nice. It was a good ending.
DGNA_Forever #4
Chapter 2: Oh goodness! I hope she was able to save her mother and truly have her back, especially after seeing her memories with her. As far as Chanyeol, it seems like he has feelings for her, but I don't know if it's too late to turn things around. Some things aren't worth saving...
DGNA_Forever #5
Chapter 1: First of all, I like the way you switch POV from present to past. That's nicely done. Second, I want to CHOKE Chanyeol for not even caring about their friendship. And Baekhyun is a sweetie and deserves more. On to the next chapter.
HansPanda #6
Chapter 3: I read it again?.
Purple-Peng 1301 streak #7
Chapter 3: It's actually kind of sad that Bomi's mother did end up dying but I like how Bomi was able to change the way she and Chanyeol meet. Even though she didn't want to see him and she did want to forget him, she realize how important he was to her. Glad that with this change, they are able to be with each other.
Purple-Peng 1301 streak #8
Chapter 2: So...I guess the marble breaking maybe caused her to forget Chanyeol?
I kind of hated it when parents make their children marry for their own needs and they don't care how their children feels about it. At least, Bomi is able to change her mother's fate.
Purple-Peng 1301 streak #9
Chapter 1: This reminds me of some of the Chinese novels I read except the female lead dies then wakes up to find out she went back to a time when she was younger. I like how Bomi made the choice to not accept Baekhyun's feelings right now because imagine if they started dating all she can think of is Chanyeol.
DaMeepster #10
Chapter 3: They do say everything happens for a reason.. they just had to meet each other at the right time.. love the story tho.. even if it is a short one.. dont normally like short stories but this one is really good
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