Three words

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Description

Kyuhyun and Jongwoon are senior and junior who knew each other because of their common friend Siwon. They started to get along with each other and slowely falling in love. Rejecting Joonwon, Kyuhyun was against staring a relationship with male. The kind of relationship that may bring shame to his family.
But will he regrete it? 

Foreword

Hello evryone...

So...I'm starting new story...

This is complete story, i wrote on my notebook and i only have to type it ^^
it will be 2 to 3 shots at max so please give it some of your time: read, comment, and subscribe if you want

The first update will come soon...

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Ps: I know i still have an ongoing fanfiction that i didn't update for a long now, but i will take of it after finishing this one ^^ (my mind was just blocked for a while)

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Taeyuriekimchj
#1
Omg so perfect T-T
xoxo_exo_chanbaek
#2
Chapter 1: Excuse me? You don’t do that kind of affection and said sorry afterwards.
Liza_Blessedx2 #3
Chapter 3: I'm always hopeful that my Kyusung have a happy ending.....But my poor Yeye :( good job Kyu came to his senses!! Thank you for this story. :D
cuteluludeer
#4
Chapter 3: Ohwa~~~ what a lovely story~ ≥ ~ ≤
Devilcloud
#5
Thank you! Hope you will like it!
lovetenworld
#6
Chapter 3: You've done a good job! You just have to work with your vocab ^^ Let's improved together! But this is good already! I don't know if there is something hidden emotions in me because I feel something or what but I somewhat got a mini heart attack because Gosh Why do our Yeye need to be stabbed before Kyuhyun realize everything. (I'm going to throw Kyuhyun to Mars HAHAHA) Well anyways there is always a room for improvement! We're going to improve~ This is good! Keep it up! ^^
Devilcloud
#7
Aww thank you so much I agree with you in almost all what you have said...
Just after writing it I released I didn't describe the places, clothes. .. And about the emotions too!
Well I have to read more and try to write something good later when I have a time ~ thank you so much for giving it some of your time ^^
Thank you!!
fatimakys #8
Chapter 3: ahh now i can see !! i do not want to comment about those tow idiots now, but please let me advice you : a good story is 4 parted things 1- the lang , and yours is good , but you better use more passive voice , it adds more and make the text richer 2-describing everything ! the places , clothes , people , even animals , i know it sounds kinda not to useful to the story but it is to make a better picture in the reader mind , and i know it will take longer to write but believe me it makes the story better ^^ and the third is the emotions , i could see that u r good at making what happens now , next and before but there were not much emotions from the characters so try to add these , and the forth is a bit crazy !! it is adding your own personality here and their and also keeping the real characters personalities too , what i mean is adding a piece of your own ideas and thoughts and your life to the story ! it makes it more lively , but it is the hardest one to do , so you can take the first three tips and you will see a huge change !!

i wrote this cuz u asked me about my opinion back in my blog so...
sorry if it disturbed u ^^ still the story ( the last part is my fav ) is really good and it is better than what i saw in the first lines in the story so cong friend , u ijng posted your first fic !!!! @+@ fighting .
fatimakys #9
Chapter 2: does woon push so hard ? i mean it is ok to fight for what u want but ... is not he forcing him self somehow ? but haaaay if i were a character in the fic , i will surly tell him to fight , and the (still so stupid) kyu ! he was so damn selfish in here !