Warriors Against the Darkness

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Yoongi was just a normal guy, seemingly invisible to society. However, when darkness falls from a strange cloud covering, no one thinks anything of it. It lasts long enough to cause damage, but The Eternal Source know what's really going on, and they randomly pick people to take on The Void, becoming the only ones who will be able to stop it, by traveling to shrines and closing the portals to a parallel existence. If they fail, the world is doomed. 

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peggyw #1
Chapter 6: Unique and entertaining story. Sad it ended with betrayal and death.
Sasha-exo_l #2
Very nicely done, though.
-Tigress- #3
Chapter 6: OMG YOU BROKE MY HEART WHYYYYYY!!!!! T.T
Very nicely done, though. I really liked how you pulled Fate into it haha (I miss Fate) and I did NOT expect that betrayal. My goodness. Yoongi was written really well, I liked how the reader could identify with him. The care you showed from him for Jungkook was great, too, because you get the feeling that there is true cost to winning this. I am really satisfied witht he ending, though it did hurt OMG WHYYYYYY but in all this was a really good read. Good luck in the contest, fighitng!!!
-Tigress- #4
You finished it! Congratulations my dear!!! ♡♡♡ I'm very proud of you and I look forward to reading it!!!
Amalya #5
Chapter 4: Well this is certainly an interesting start here. I like how the characters tend to interact, and I'm admittedly happy the story is following Yoongi for the moment. haha You certainly have an interesting enemy in the Void as well. I'm not sure what I'm looking for yet, other than a powerful force against them, and the potential minions it might manifest, like seen in this chapter. Yoongi's protective reaction towards Jungkook is quite endearing and sweet, though I'm curious as to how things got so twisted between him and Jimin. I mean, you do mention it, but this level of animosity makes it seem like there's something more going on. >.> At least Namjoon is there to help keep them in line and attempting to work together until this mess can be figured out between them.

I'm a bit surprised that they were chosen at random though. My inclination is to think that is only what they are being told and that there's something otherwise special about them. Why else would seven young men who have little to no training be chosen to save the world, after all? I will say I'm having a hard time keeping track of time here. I believe a month was mentioned before they were going to leave or need to be at the first portal, as it were, but I don't really have a feel for just how much time is going by. That doesn't seem like a lot of time to allow them to learn their weapons and the teamwork necessary to fight what they're up against. Maybe I'm missing something, but that stood out to me is all.

Otherwise, I'm definitely curious to see what they're going to run into on their way to the next part. I'm definitely suspicious that there was a sign for them and a place just laid out for them to rest after they got to the first point. haha Maybe there's much more going on than I can see at the moment. haha Keep up the good work though, and good luck with the rest of it!
-Tigress- #6
Haha as soon as I saw this prompt I thought it looked like something you would want to write! Good luck with it!
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