Clueless

Description

Rating: PG; Genre: humour (12,600 words)

In which Jonghyun learns about friendship, love, and the appropriate use of margarine

Foreword

I owe a huge thank you to my beta, Hyo (squickz), especially for helping me spot and fix all the places where my dialogue shifted from "plausible for a teenage boy" to "definitely a grown- woman"!

Your support while I was writing--letting me know it was actually funny and that the characters and interactions were working--was invaluable.

But it's more than just your help with this story. Over the past year, you've really pushed me and inspired me to try harder, to see aspects of my writing that need more work and to put effort into figuring out how to write a more well-rounded story. I appreciate your honesty most of all. Admittedly it threw me off-balance initially, but I have learned to put my ego aside and learn from what you are saying. And, of course, the best part of your candidness is that when you tell me something works, I know it's the truth, not just a friend being nice.

Thanks Hyo. <3

 

 

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iam_me00
44 streak #1
Chapter 7: This is funny 😂
Jongtae_SHINee_Minke
#2
Chapter 7: Love it! ❤️
SHINee_Jongtae_Minke #3
Chapter 7: This is one of the best stories I ever read and I love the way you writed Jongtae's relationship<3
misskimhee
#4
Chapter 7: this story is so lovely aaaaaaagghhhhh T°T
all characters are well drawn, you described them very very well. also of course their relationships T°T
im crying, jongtae relationship is so surreal, so sweet I can't describes it TT huhuhu
kimkeyk
#5
Chapter 7: this was so. cute. and i loved the awakard lil vibe around taemin n jong??? esp jongs lil crush on eunhyuk and aaaaa this was v v nice good job i loved this.
calypso_hawthorne
#6
Chapter 7: AHHH. This was absolutely perfect! So well written and adorable and hilarious. I was cringing so hard during the part scene. What was Jonghyun thinking?! And the jongtae was soooo good. So realistic! But I think one of my favorite parts of this story was the overall friendship between everyone. I also love the way you wrote Key.

And it reminded me of my own high school too. Amazing job with this fic. Keep up the great work! <3
piuxel #7
This is just so adorable and cute and /teenish/, i adored it from the very beginning ugh. I think i never got so much secondhand embarrassment from anything before that party scene oh my god. but was it worth it? Totally. i also just adore your take on key- i know, most people write him as a cold silent guy, but the way you made him, showing bits of his cheekiness, so good (And relatable, but shh)!! Thank you for writing this!
ImHot1130 #8
AHHAHAH ITS SO FUNNNNYYYY
OMGitsAZIA #9
This has to be the cutest, most hilarious thing I've read in a VERY long time. The party scene had me cracking up and I absolutely adore jongtae's relationship
SHIN33ee
#10
Such a sweet author's note, dear grown- woman XD