When It Rains

Description

On her first day of her final year in highschool, Solar meets a beauty that enchants her at first sight, a girl named Moonbyul. Deciding to admire her from afar, it all changes when on one rainy day, she manages to step up and take ten seconds of insane courage. This is a story about how life never, ever goes the way you want it to.

Foreword

important note: do NOT read the comments unless you wish to be spoiled. i would highly recommend against that, it ruins the story. enjoy reading!
 
 
 
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mypurpleapplepen #1
Chapter 1: This is very well written. This is one of my favorites now.
ikki_04 #2
Chapter 1: T ^ T
That was too heart wrenching! Sad but damn, it's beautiful. I really love your story!
Taeistae #3
Chapter 1: Wow....this hurt like a but it's reality :/
Wheeout30 #4
Chapter 1: I should stop reading at the moment when they had first kiss coz ASDFGHJKL but it still amazing by the wayyy <3
Carolsama1993 #5
Chapter 1: D':... I can't express my feelings.. T^T
GreasyMoonSun #6
Chapter 1: YAH! Why do you love to hurt us so much~? I can't handle all these angsty fics! Still, wonderful job. I really enjoy your one-shots, keep up the great work!
moonbabe_erin #7
Chapter 1: I love these lines:
"She said she loved the rain, yet opened up her umbrella when it started to pour

She said she loved the sun, yet refused to let its golden rays kiss her skin"


I think it basically says that one minute you say you love that person then after a few sec your feelings change in an instant. Feelings really do fade. I love the methaphors that you used. I was alry expecting the story to end angsty cos of this line "You said you loved the rain but you opened up your umbrella whenever it did."
09398108 #8
Chapter 1: wow rude.
so rude.
but it was bittersweet i like.
also i like how realistic everything was considering their corresponding age at the time.
good job
Kiyomi0804 #9
Chapter 1: I was waiting for this to break me from the very beginning and it did. I really liked the way you used rain and sun metaphorically in the story. I felt like Moonbyul was never that deeply in love with Solar and I think you did a great job in portraying it!
D_Moon_212 #10
Chapter 1: This made me tear up y'know. It kind of reminded me of something. I still believe that this can habe a happy ending. Please let there be a sequel. This can't end like this... As you said in the author's note that byul's feelings just really faded but I think there still left. Maybe she's lookingbfor something. Or that she thought yongsun is getting boring but I don't believe in that. For me, feelings don't easily fade unless that person left a big permanent scar that made you feel numb. I'd like to think that byul's decision will make her regret it. And by the time she realized how perfect yongsun is for her, she already moved on from byul something like that (the same thing happenednto me). I truly love that song from the first time it was released so I felt so sad knowing byul made yongsun pinky promise to never forget their song like why would you make her promise that when you're the one who introduced it as your song together and then you're the one who broke the promise *sighs* people really tend to act stupidly and only realize it later when it's too late. Can I still convince you to write a sequel?....
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