Chapter 5: This was for sure lighter than the first Drabble, which is a relief because I'm not in the mood for angst lol.
My first thoughts of what was gonna happen were so angsty and bloody lol, I thought Kibum would fall to the ground from up there and die and omg I can't believe I even imagined that ;--; //slaps herself
I can't even imagine how it would be to have Acrophobia. It sure must because just being in a sorta high place must be terrifying for some ;;
Do you have experience in ballet? Because the names of the poses made this more enjoyable for me, because of how detailed it was. This strangely makes me want to research about ballet, too.
The words chosen were perfect for the situation, and the feelings of sickness, sadness, happiness and achievement all hit me as I read it. I think you described this in a realistic way, because who knows how many people are going through this to fulfill their dreams of being in the stage, with the blazing lights on them and them only.
I remember I read your own analysis of this piece before reading the actual Drabble, and your explanations of this were so deep. The description of the Drabble gives out a perfect synopsis of the story, and it's also written beautifully.
Overall, reading this was very enjoyable, though it was also sad, but that's good. Thank you for this Drabble (idk why I think this little Drabble is better than some long stories lol.) I'm excited to read more Drabbles by you!
Chapter 6: Well.... THAT was unexpected. Is it bad I suspected the cannibalism from the 'pink color of the cupcake?' I brushed it aside and read it because I was pretty sure it was going to end comically (Blame the song, not me) and after finishing it... oh well, my fault for not reading the warning.
This was really different from the others, but I liked it a lot :) the twistedness of this was as unexpected as interesting.
Chapter 4: The first time I read this it appeared pretty bland, given how short it was. But when I re-read this, I started noticing the details: the anxiety that comes with acrophobia, condescension from others and the thought that the fear was ridiculous.
It's nice how you managed to blend them all :)
Chapter 2: I always wanted to read your stories because I saw you around AFF a lot and you seemed like a really good writer. But the moment I clicked on this and read it... I was mindblown. I definitely didn't expect this. The way you seem to sew words together and convey your messages through such simplicity is beautiful. Please don't block me if you get 22 comments in a row ;_;
Chapter 15: I read your drabble, I See Fire, for The Closer writing contest and wow. I think your writing style is great in here and enjoyed it very much. Just wanted to let you know. <3
Chapter 17: Omg I actually feel like some kind of psychic bc I was like~ which oneshot is it? And i just guessed this one and woot~ I was right the first time.
I feel like a creep but
I laughed so much
*officially creeped out at oneself but too shameless to care*
I love it >_<
I mean. No. This is inappropriate. Ahem e.o
Chapter 15: Awww ㅠㅠ I remember reading this the first time around. It really hits hard being so real a situation. Poor baby. Love the angst and family feels <3
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