Irritating

Description

Youngjae was not envious, he simply disliked him. He disliked the way he walked confidently in the school's corridors, how everyone was willing to talk and laugh with him. He disliked his always-tidy and attractive attire. His perfect chocolate hair, his deep eyes. He disliked Jung Daehyun.

Foreword

HELLO everyone!

This is going to be my first story ever, so please give me some piece of advice to sort out something worthy about all this.

The story will contain mental diseases-related material, so if you're not comfortable about that, do not go on reading.

English is not my first language so forgive me for my grammar etc.

Enjoy!

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LuhPark
#1
Please update soon!
yellowrere #2
Chapter 5: it feels like it gonna be angst i hope it not.
i hope you can update it . I really want to know what 'll happen
eternalpain #3
Chapter 5: I'll be waiting for your update!!! ~>_<~~>_<~~>_<~
WaterHorseyBlues #4
Chapter 5: It's nice to see that Daehyun's got a weakness and Youngjae can abuse it. I'm interested to see what happens with Youngjae's illness now
Mariaree
#5
Chapter 5: I don't understand them really...
So will be waiting for the next chapters then.
Really they are so confusing...
Anyway, thanks for the chapter~ :)
jungshimhae98
#6
Chapter 5: THIS IS INTERESTING
jungshimhae98
#7
Chapter 5: Why do I feel like this will be a lowkey angst-ish fic?
WaterHorseyBlues #8
Chapter 4: This is interesting so far. I'm interested to see why Daehyun's so set on talking to Youngjae when Youngjae seems so uninterested in him.
I don't know if you're prone to panic/anxiety attacks yourself but they're actually different things - Youngjae definitely experiences panic attacks in this. I found a description of their differences:
"An anxiety attack, people may feel fearful, apprehensive, may feel their heart racing or feel short of breath, but it's very short lived, and when the stressor goes away, so does the anxiety attack.
Panic attack on the other hand doesn't come in reaction to a stressor. It's unprovoked and unpredictable. And during a panic attack the individual is seized with terror, fear, or apprehension. They may feel that they're going to die, or lose control or have a heart attack. They have a host of physical symptoms which may include chest pain, shortness of breath, dizziness, nausea."
I'd actually really like to see what it is that Youngjae's been diagnosed with/has experienced that gives him these panic attacks and what his general coping methods are - I use different methods to my friends and I like seeing what people use. (I'm actually pretty excited to read a fic about mental illness that isn't a complete mess and misunderstanding of what illnesses are actually like - especially since this is one I can kinda relate to!)
Mariaree
#9
Chapter 4: I don't really understand their relationship but I guess I would be easy in the future...

NOW.

How can Daehyun laugh at something like that? He deserve that, but I want to know the revenge...

Thanks you for the chapter~ :)
Mariaree
#10
Chapter 3: I didn't know but I want to read more!

I left so much comments on Dae ig and Jae Twitter...

Thanks for the chapter~ :)