Chapter 2: I really enjoyed this. You do a really good job at ending the chapters too. It really leaves a lasting impact on the reader (or me at least) "tell him he's a fool for loving you" chills lol. I like how there's a lot more going on with their feelings (were u trying to go for like 5 stages of grief kinda thing?) instead of the usual fighting and sobbing.
i thought this was the last chapter since that last prgh leaves like an open ending but I guess there's more! (Still hoping for xiuhan lol) I wonder what luhans gonna do
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