Chapter 1: I feel bad for the oc. Sehun peomised her that he will always remembered her yet he broke the promise . he don't deserve the oc so much, when she needed her he's not there for her. He didny even call her . he should comfort her yet he didn't . he really don't deserve the oc so much
Chapter 1: Beautifully written.
Sehun is selfish. He is. I get that he had to move away but he could at least keep in touch, emailing her once a month would suffice, after all, wasn't she a dear friend of his? Didn't he care about her? Was it that easy for him to forget her? It seems like it. I get the fact that you tend to be busy with life and whatnot but when she called him all heartbroken because her mom died he could of at least talked to her for a longer period and not dismissed her so easily. I'm positive if he was in her shoes she would have dropped everything for him. So yes, he is selfish. He doesn't deserve a friend like her. And it breaks my heart to see her still longing for him.
It would be nice if you could turn it into a full chaptered story but seeing how you've wrote it a long time ago the inspiration you had for it might have been long since gone. Either way I greatly enjoyed this one-shot :)
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