-let me whisper you sweet nothings in your dreams;;

Description

His name is Cho Kyuhyun, 28 years old and he knows that he has fallen in love with the short boy of his dreams, with the unique cheekbones and the alluring eyes. He has fallen in love with the short boy, whose name has been left in the air of his dreams as simply a mere, silent whisper.

 

 

 

Foreword

His name is Cho Kyuhyun, 28 years old. He is currently working as a singer for a local indie rock band. Everyone told him that his vocals have come straight out of heaven and that he is actually wasting his precious talent on that good for nothing band. Kyuhyun perfectly knew that. But whatever paid the bills was worth it and currently that band was doing that job for him.

His name is Cho Kyuhyun, 28 years old and he knows that he has fallen in love with the short boy of his dreams, with the unique cheekbones and the alluring eyes. He has fallen in love with the short boy, whose name has been left in the air of his dreams as simply a mere, silent whisper.

He used to try to forget the boy, because he felt that the boy was just a sick and twisted hallucination of his mind, trying to make him slowly lose his mind. But every time he tried to forget him, he would see the short boy in his dreams, wearing a cheshire-like smile on his face, approaching him slowly and caressing his face tenderly, brushing his cheeks with the tips of his fingertips, leaving feather-like touches on his rough skin.  And no matter how hard he tried, he would never be able to forget those angelic touches –and in all honesty, he did not want to forget them.-

But it was better that he could not remember the boy’s name. He already felt as if he was betraying him.

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Pairings: KyuWook / past!KyuHae& slight!YesungxOC

Rating: T+ 

Warnings: angst, hurt/comfort, minor character death, slight , , swearing

 

 

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bluegamer
#1
Chapter 1: I've always liked the concept of soulmates so I love this story. I was sad about Hae's part though.
AhgaseElf
#2
Chapter 1: AHH! This is so cute!!! :D :D :D Keep up the amazing work!
Busquets16
243 streak #3
Chapter 1: Okay I actually cried when the end came ... Donghae. He is always so precious and fluffy. This concept was really cool I won't lie. Amazing as always !!
cmngcm #4
Chapter 1: Errr.....tbh i don't quite accept HaeKyu.....HaeWook is fine but not HaeKyu! May be using some random girl to be the ex-gf would be better. If the story is about Soulmate, Kyu shouldn't love DH so much as they are not destined to be tgt.....sorry this is just my concept of Soulmate....you will not love your "non-soulmate" that much is your soulmate really exist....though I am happy to see KyuWook happy ending but I still don't feel Kyu loves RW as much as RW loves Kyu, and why do Kyu keep asking if RW trust him, to me, he may just need that assurance because he don't love RW that much and he is afraid RW leave him like DH and I think he still missed DH.....ok, sorry this is just my feeling when I read the story.....thanks for the story anyway.
lovekyuwook
#5
Chapter 1: Wow! Such an interesting premise to this story!! :D
Im so glad that Ryeowook found Kyuhyun and vice versa!! *happy dances*
I keep thinking perhaps...Donghae found Eunhyuk waiting for him in the after life ;)
hzhfobsessed
#6
Chapter 1: Detached is the correct word, but that didn't affect the story in any way!!
revena #7
Chapter 1: I KNEW ITTTT! It's 'one confession'! i used to hear that song everyday, so i memorized the lyrics along with its translation XD anddd this is very good. i don't know why there is only one comment(two actually, +me kkk~).

Hmmm, maybe later you can adjust the alignment of the story from left to justify. Because in my opinion, it will look better and neat.
Hanzo242 #8
Chapter 1: This is actually very good since English is not your first language! Haha I can see the symptoms of Kyuwook takeover in your life lol. This story is pretty sweet and touching. It's sad that Kyuhae can't be together because of the soulmate thingy ... But nevermind, I came here for Kyuwook anyway.

Would you like some feedback? (Strictly personal opinion!) I thought that the description (Physical, emotion etc) in this story was well done but the development of the story was a bit rushed. It seemed to me like Kyuhyun was still pretty attached to Donghae ("He already felt as if he was betraying him.") so I thought Kyuwook would take some time to get together. The main part was when Ryeowook almost died. Perhaps the dialogue could be changed to make it more realistic. For example, “Don’t you dare die, Ryeowook” could be changed to "Are you ok? Aish, are you a dummy or what? No one in their right mind crosses the road like that! Were you trying to kill yourself? Seriously, I almost had a heart attack seeing that and I don't even know why I am caring for you..."(Maybe you could add an additional meeting between the two before this incident.) Then a bit more relationship development. I guess I thought that the link between them ought to be emphasized a bit more to show that they are really soulmates. But it's ok! Relationships are very hard to develop and describe, it takes a lot of practice!

I think you should continue posting stories. Cause even if no one gives feedback, you still have the opportunity to practice your writing. You can also review it yourself ^^ I hope this comment doesn't demoralize you but encourages you instead :) Hehehe, expecting great stories from you now!

BTW, I just noticed a bit of grammar mistake in your dialogue. '“You remember me.” The boy whispered.' ought to be '“You remember me,” the boy whispered.' But, I'm not too sure so here's a website for you 'http://theeditorsblog.net/2010/12/08/punctuation-in-dialogue/'