HEATHENS :| |: MAKE WAY FOR A NEW GROUP OF HEROES.
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heathens
a new breed of heroes
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The world is familiar with the Avengers. Familiar with the mayhem they invite with their existence in the universe. They're the heroes that protects the world from evil. Regardless of the good they do, many are starting to turn on them. It's gotten to the point where even they can't get along at times. Many are starting if they're worth the destruction they leave in their wake.
The truly evil villains of the world are kept in a special prison ward in Korea. No one gets out though many have tried. Those who are kept there are not ones to keep the world safe. They are the ones of nightmares.
What could possibly go wrong when the world government decides to let loose some of these heathens alongside the Avengers?
Chapter 17: okay wow, i haven't really commented in a while - i'm so sorry about that!
i love selina's chapter! i know i kept her application pretty vague so i like how you wrote this :) your skills are amazing, tbh. i love her conversation with clint as i think that's a good representation of their dynamic. i love how she snaps at him for assuming her to be stupid - i can't with that. it's so good! then with tony?! fave part was definitely her twisting tony's arm. tony just always gets in trouble with the ladies - it's hilarious. let's hope none of them actually break him.
all in all, i love this chapter and you definitely did her justice! thanks so much for the wonderful chapter <3
Chapter 17: These solo chapters are amazing I love getting to know everyone's characters on a deeper level :O Giselle is so put together omg how to be that graceful irl? Selina has a lot of anger in her I love it! Can't wait for the next one ^_^
Chapter 17: dang! selina, i wasnt expecting her to snap like this.
clint has a big bear heart! he cares tho.
tony is always everyone's favourite victim haha.
Chapter 17: Damn O_O Selina hit him hard.
I like this chapter and it means they have a lot to handle with each other them <3
You write really well and show how each of them are feeling <3
I feel bad for Clint and Tony DX
Can't wait for who is next !
Chapter 17: Oh dang to Selina.
Just all the Heathens need a beach trip and lots of love ; u ;
Thanks for writing so quickly again. :)
I keep on coming up with headcanons about Eve (that I can't tell if are canon or not yet XD).
So excited. <3
Loved the chapter but like poor Tony, getting manhandled like all the time. ;P
Love your writing. ^_^
Chapter 16: I APOLOGIZE FOR THE LATE RESPONSE. i absolutely love how you portrayed giselle! i'm glad that you made her tell her side of the story and that twist with the guard :O i'm sad for giselle but i feel like that definitely would happen to her in a prison that they've been held in. i like how you took the story to this dark twist because it is absolutely freaking awesome! BRUCE <3 that green ball of sunshine is just so adorable and i love their interaction. i do feel bruce would be this way regardless of who the female is - she just needs to be female and bruce will be stuttering every second. tony is just so damn suave with the ladies like i lowkey sensed something between them at the beginning and i wouldn't mind the two getting close over time.
once again, love what you're doing with the story so i can't wait to continue reading! good luck and take your time with the characters as school can be a pain, believe me!
Chapter 16: giselle had it hard too in prison. wth! people are so mean and they don't understand that even if the heathens did bad things, they are still human being with emotions even if they have powers or nah.
i love how the avengers are slowly getting to know them. they were all judging too quickly and now they are learning where everyone is coming from. they are getting to know why do they became who they are today.
Chapter 16: ohmygod poor jae :( poor giselle :( the guards at that prison were really ty,
but it actually sometimes happen in real life too :(
even though jae provoked them the guards should've known better than to get in a room with her
can't imagine how scary it must've been for giselle being ambushed by a bunch of people at the same time like that
love the story so far XD dark & fun XD
as for gramercy, i kinda wish she had more dialogue. she hasn't spoken much since she got there. :\
and maybe some more interactions with the avengers and/or the other members :)
also maybe she could ask to see her brothers and gets angry when they say she couldn't.
she just misses her brothers so much :''
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