Devoured

Description

Every year, the group of five would go on a camping trip. Kyungsoo would organize the location, Jongin would take care of the supplies, Yifan and Chanyeol would focus on checking the gear they needed and Sehun would make sure everything is in place.

However, they could have never, even in their wildest dreams, predicted what will happen on their 3rd annual trip. After all, the woods on the Atlantic Coast seemed harmless enough, cold and slippery, but harmless.

That’s what they believed, until they lived through the most terrifying experiences of their lives.

And by live I don’t mean survive.

Foreword

 

On the little winter night,

Something small has caught my sight.

A group of boys, sitting right

By the entrance to my house,

Crying, whimpering, yelling in pain

Unprotected by the rain.

They screamed and shouted to be saved,

To live at least another day.

Oh the poor boys didn’t know,

They were sitting on deaths door.

 

 

 

Warning: major character death, post mortem descriptions and some disturbing hallucinations/supernatural beings are involved so please, if you are not okay with this, do not read.

 

Key Words:

Safe point (only exists in this story): a place in the mountains that has some of the staff living there, something along the lines of a control tower with medicine, food, weapons and clothing. Basically a potential place to stay if lost.

Big thanks to AnneOnym, the owner of Spotlight Posters (link in banner) for this absolutely stunning poster and background! It sets the mood ever so well~

 

I also wan to thank prince-jimin from Ilaria Multi-shop (link in banner) for the fabulous trailer that has stunning music, on point cuts and colouring.

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This story is created by me for 'The Pathcode Competition', using the prompts 'shoes hanging from street wires' and 'hallucinations'.

Review done by bapbangme from 'WHIMSICAL review shop' (link to the review is here)

The storyline is all mine, so please do not repost my work. If you wish to include it on tumblr or any other website/app as a recommendation never claim it to be yours and provide the link to this story with appropriate credits; if you can, please do tell me as well. Now sit back and enjoy the story!

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cyd4294 #1
Chapter 1: I came here for Krisyeol act. But Yeol was the first one to die and there goes my hopes

And this is creepy af. Camping in the middle of the wood is never a good idea
cyd4294 #2
Chapter 1: I came here for Krisyeol act. But Yeol was the first one to die and there goes my hopes

And this is creepy af. Camping in the middle of the wood is never a good idea
aliasfeea #3
Chapter 1: Who's the figure??? I wanna knoww T.T
yurrick #4
Chapter 1: ive never read an exo horror fic that gave me the heebies jeebies as much as this one has, good lord. i always read exo horror fics at night bc, like, they’re never so scary that im like, “i should just read them during the day” bUt after reading this one, im having second thoughts about my assumption. (´°̥̥̥̥̥̥̥̥ω°̥̥̥̥̥̥̥̥｀) great job on this! its really quite unsettling (in a good way, of course!).

p.s. the ending... i know it’s open-ended for a reason, but i really wonder who it is? its not sehun, it’s DEFINITELY not chanyeol, so that leaves yifan or kyungsoo... how could it be yifan though? he went insane in the forest and surely either died of the cold or from the wendigo! so it must be kyungsoo, right? but didn’t his face get burnt? like, definitely third degree if his flesh was dripping straight off. how could he give a blank smile... especially when his face wouldn’t have been healed yet? oof, the fic will be on my mind for QUITE a while :,)
JNekoCY #5
Ahhhh,i'm back yet again.I have exams tomorrow,but i need to warm up first before i studied like crazy XD....I miss this fic,i remember the time it was new and i used to read it late into the night to get more chills lol.I'll come back again and again to enjoy this spooky tale,please don't ever delete it:D....this deserves way more viewss..its awesome.Anyway,i start to wonder,when you were still writing it,and i was dropping long comments after every chapter,i start to worry whether or not i was spoiling it for the others XD.. if so then i'm sorry guys ^o^,but anyway,beware of the comment section hahahaa.I really love this fic,its sooooo creepy and you are amazing authornim.
DaeJeayo #6
Chapter 1: (O_O)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(>_<)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
>_>)
(<_<
(>~<)!!!!
JNekoCY #7
I'm back again XD....cause i love this so muchh.This fic is simply creeptacular,love it always.Mindblowingly creepy.
lurimamikah1509 #8
Damn good son! Really creepy and giving me second thoughts about camping in the woods hahaha

Anyway, I had this thought when I was reading the description
'It would be so minded if Kyungsoo is behind all this'
Since he's the one organizing the camp and yes! Seriously, even in real life Kyungsoo is a bit creepy with those innocent looks. And I thought Jongin was possessed or something but it turns out that hes about to die too hahaha and I guess the last part was Soo? Maybe? Or maybe Kris? Or maybe the humanoid creature? Wtv I enjoy this so mucj that I want to challenge myself writing horror but I hahaha
gothprincess666 #9
interesting it kinda reminds me of until dawn, i look forward to your future updates. :)
lastbencher #10
Chapter 1: I ing dont know why I read this... in like the middle of the night.... gawd... I cant even breathe.... it was scary.... but beyond amazing!
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