what's the story

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Sometimes the muse runs away and Daehyun thinks of Youngjae.

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blueberry_muffin #1
Chapter 1: OMG THIS IS SO GOOD OMG I COULDN'T STOP READING ONCE I STARTED OK
IT ME IN AND I FELL FOR THIS HARDER THAN GRAVITY OK
WOW THIS HAS TO BE ONE OF THE BEST PIECES I'VE READ IN A REALLY LONG TIME OK
WOW
JUST WOW
YOUR DICTION IS AMAZING AND JUST GAHH SO MANY FEELS FROM THIS!!
I'M KINDA SORRY I'M SCREAMING IN CAPS AT YOU OK BUT LIKE I CAN'T. GET.OVER.THIS.FIC. GOSH
LIKE I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHAT TO SAY OK I'M SPEECHLESS AT THE BEAUTY OF THIS
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING AUTHORNIM!! I TRULY ENJOYED THIS! ^0^
chinchillas #2
yes, I love all your daejae stuff so much. That was an awesome mix of daehyun being thoughtful (and slightly angsty) while lusting over his jae ;)
inixaw
#3
Chapter 1: im too absorbed reading i didn't notice it has ended until i read your 50 minutes note thing. like seriously u wrote something like this for a good 50 minutes??!?!? wow your 50 minutes was golden, not like some other people ((scratches my nose))
probably you have grown tired of getting remarks like "wow what a beautiful piece! you have such a great talent! you are amazing!" but tbh theres no other comments can be given to your great masterpieces, your words make people lost their words.

continue to write beautiful & inspiring pieces okay; you're an inspiration <3
alienkoala #4
Chapter 1: im trying to sleep but i cant so here i am trying to catch up with your beautiful pieces instead <33
i really like that this is daehyun pov because i love reading about his thoughts and feelings for youngjae ((and to read how thirsty he is for youngjae lol))
your writing really amazes me;; it's like you can write any form any style and still come out 11/10!
you are really very talented bb!❤️
greypaper
#5
This was gorgeous, your writing is really very beautiful. I just (sort of) understand what Daehyun wanted to say and it made my guts turn a little. Also the small 'i want to you' interferences were perfectly timed
I love this~♡
himthighs #6
Chapter 1: I wanted to cry when I hit the last word. This was beautiful, really. The "and you...." was a combo breaker but still it was beautiful ( ´∀`)
Bapsloli
#7
Chapter 1: My favorite color is brown :> Just saying

Anyways, GOD WHAT IS IT WITH YOU AND WRITING SUCH BEAUTIFUL PIECES THAT I DONT EVEN REALIZE IM CRYING BECAUSE THE LIGHT THAT IT GIVES OFF IS TOO BLINDING.
You're really talented. I often wonder if you're a real author that really publishes books (*cough* it's a really big possibility. I wouldn't count on you not laughing if you really are a legendary author and I'm just stating the obvious) and if you are, take my money.
To think you wrote all this within 50 minutes is so mindblowing. Gosh, I can't even write half of this within a month's time.
This is really too beautiful, you're making me tear up. I like that it highlights his thoughts on his lover, reminding him of vintage things. That's really nice.. I often think like that too on certain occasions, except it's pretty dumb in my case, plus the way you just describe things- so detailed.
You really have your way with words.
Like a word goddess.
You're a veggie word goddess. Hear me out on this one.
[It didn't even feel like 1273 words, it felt a lot more than that. It's the details' effects, and that is beautiful, definitely not a thing just anyone can do] ♡
igigomilk
#8
Chapter 1: I love your writing style! It's really beautiful and it's one of the few that manages to paint images in my head about what I read and these images are really nice and pretty!! Thank you for this, you are so talented!