Veelah Critique Shoppe

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Mission

Brutal Honesty

Welcome to Veelah Critique Shoppe, a rather small, dedicated service specializing in honest opinions and brutal nit-picking.

Guidelines

The representatives here will assist you with written works (excerpt), graphics, layouts, trailers, and miscellaneous, artistic products. If you would like to request a critique for: written works, please press [1], graphics or trailers, please press [2], layouts, please press [3]. If you would like to request a critique for something other than the above options, please press [#] and specify. We will redirect you to the correct department.

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Veelah Critique Shoppe

Open for request twice a month

Veelah Shoppe is open for requests on the first Sunday and the last Saturday of every month. Request will not be accepted any other day. No exceptions. There is no formal rubric. We will tell you what we want to tell you... our honest opinion. This shoppe is not recommended for sensitive millennials. This shoppe is not intended for praise seekers.

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veelah

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Veelah offers feedback on stories and layouts along with other things. She is currently employed as a visual mascot over at Infinite Possibilities. She is familiar with a variety of medias. Over ten years of experience. Here are a few of her artistic works: MV, Writing, Comics, Poster, Cover, Layout, Review, Blog, Ceramics.

Katerina93

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Rose comments on graphics and sometimes trailers. She isn't as talented in art or experienced as coffee bowl and goldfish, but she has a keen eye for detail. She is blunt, up front, and honest of what she likes and dislikes. Her critiques are based on the overall appearance, theme, font, and color for posters and timing for trailers.

ann1914

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Goldfish ann takes care of goldfish affairs. She owns Infinite Possibilities graphics and one-shot request shop. She can be blunt... but to a lesser degree.

Topu-Da

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Grey will detect clichés in an instant (even when it happens to be a needle in a haystack). Where will you place on her excitement meter? As the guest representative of Veelah Critique Shoppe, she is the most blunt of the blunts. Does that make any sense? Absolutely.

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Madness

Comments

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KaihleeLo #1 Sep 9, 2017 02:22:32

Chapter 10: Thank you for the critique, though this review was confusing as heck because of the layout I still was able to grasp the reviewers' insightful notes. Clinged should have been clung (obviously). I use google doc so it should automatically have a spell checker but it only checks to a certain degree, as you can see most of the time it doesn't catch . I don't plan to change "In the decades of 1800..." - maybe I'll write it as "In the 1800s" but - personally, I feel - yeah it's what you may find in a textbook; however, referring to a dynasty makes me feel I should now write accordingly to a specific non-fictional time period. And that's something I don't want to do.

I'm a very, in fact overly, descriptive writer and it's something I just naturally do. If I cut it down then I get this feeling that my readers wouldn't get the full picture I wanted to paint for them. But I will practice being even less descriptive (no lie, if you saw/read "Concealed Identity" some month ago you would want to strangle me). Thank goodness you for bringing up the formal and informal thing. I went back and forth with it so much I still don't know whether to keep it formal or informal. But when I get it figured out I'll go back make those changes. Overall I took a lot away from this 'discussion', even if it doesn't look like it. Thank you for being so quick with the review.

Ann - be prepared for some dense stuff in "Camellia On Top". I'll keep you in mind and try to make it less dense than "Concealed Identity" but no promises >_< due to the same reasons above.

KaihleeLo #2 Aug 10, 2017 19:51:05

Alrighty requested~ Thank you!

KellySeumilli #3 Aug 10, 2017 14:10:49

Hello ^^ I'd like to use my pass for a story critique ^^

KaihleeLo #4 Aug 10, 2017 07:13:02

Hello~ would love to use my pass for a story review.

chariseuma #5 Jul 17, 2017 04:36:42

Chapter 8: if anything i am grateful for ur honesty lmao there's no exactly romance in the story; it mainly focuses on the main character trying to find the truth of her sister

She's actually based on UMJI from g-friend and mate, i also happen to not like the name eunji but i thought whatever otl

Thanks for your honest comments and I'll be sure to check the tenses when I have the time

(Yes aff should have dog emojis lol)

chariseuma #6 Jul 6, 2017 04:16:44

Hiya I requested. Cheers x

sunflowerpots #7 Apr 16, 2017 01:59:38

Chapter 6: Dafaq. Hahahaha. There are Jose Rizal's minions here omg. Lol, I tried looking for reactions regarding the end part of the story but okay I had fun reading this. The story's trigger warned hence the 'subs only' so I really have no choice regarding that :)
The excerpt reading was quite nice, lol. I tried my best. XD thanks for this though.

ann1914 #8 Apr 16, 2017 01:48:51

Chapter 7: The title and recording for this chapter are amazing, lol.

sunflowerpots #9 Apr 3, 2017 10:36:38

I requested. *I'm definitely excited*

jenmarenchenjihae #10 Apr 2, 2017 21:44:40

I requested, it was quite hard.