Open Eyes (remade)

Description

The description, alright, I guess there really is no turning back on this, since I already started to type. Plus I'm too lazy to delete. I'm really hoping more people get to really read this, it would give me great pleasure if that happened. My goal isn't to get any type of title through this story, though I would like to become an inspiration, or a help. I remember when I was younger I wrote a story here before, many liked it, many helped me through the comments. That's what I hope my readers would be like, helpful.
Don't be afraid to go for it. I know I tried not to be. That's why I'm doing this, I hope anyone who reads this, enjoys it as much as I will writing it, so please, like and subscribe, and also comment below as the story goes so I know how to improve myself.

Foreword

The small bulb above her head flickered, it was dark out and she was frightened, 'is it a ghost? Oh no!' She thought.
"Ghost please don't hurt me," The girl whimpered out, afraid of the unknown. Just as that moment came the lights flickered off and she screamed, it rang through the entire room.
"What happened!" The boy screamed, he ran into the pitch black room and as they bumped and fell on each other the male wrapped himself around her to protect her. "You're okay, I'm right here." He whispered to her.

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kwanggu #1
Chapter 7: you know.... I always wait your updates.... luckily I found it :D please continue this story...... I beg you....
Marinaaaa #2
Chapter 6: Thank You for sharing the new link I hope you update fast because I'm very curious