A Foreigner in Danger

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Troubled childhood love distorts into rebellious romance; but neither Taehyung nor Jimin were prepared for the fatal consequences of loving the same beautiful girl, especially as their debut is around the corner. Love becomes a game of death with only one winner. 

 

 

 

 

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Foreword

 

Whose love is stronger...Kim Taehyung's or Park Jimin's? 

 

How can you let two brothers fight over you?

 

...But it's not your fault!

 

Fate has something else planned.

 

Love isn't child's play.

Love is dangerous, love is obsessive, love is a lie.

 

It's time you found out the hard way.

 

BangtanElixir
Sorry for the delay! University is killing meee but look forward to a new chapter real soon...! I love the comments, they all make my day!

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VanillaSugarARMY
#1
Chapter 51: *Speechless and actually crying* The ending was really sad and I actually cried but I loved this fanfic and u r such a good writer I don't have words to express what I am feeling right now :)
yukinaruse #2
Chapter 51: I don't know what to say .. if you recognized me from your story horns , you must know that I FREAKING LOVE YOU , I was so so sad that the story was ending and the thought of not being able to read your amazing work really hurt me so I wanted to read more and I found this story and let me tell you I felt all sort of emotions and feelings from happiness to anger to sadness and heart break this desevse an award a book a FREAKING 3 HOURS LONG MOVIE it's beautefull no it's GORGEOUS
I must confess that in the middle of my reading I wanted to stop cause I have seen that this story was somewhat relatebal to my true life , i felt vulnerable and I feared that the crul reality that we all live will also haunt this story ,cause i know it's angst and I read angst to try and see the good in my life and situations in reality but this story was really similar I was scared of knowing what will happen it was like I went to a fortune taller kind of thing but I disided that I would finish it and now that I did I'm happy ,the ending was to touching for me I cried miserably but it gave me hope and I have been waiting all my life for some of it and for someone to rasure me about life I never expected it to be like this trough a story and an author (both wonderful ) but I can't express how grateful I am to you for continuing this I know that at some point it must have hurt you to write your beautiful characters's death and misery so I admire your strength and hard work a lot
Wow I talk tooooo much hahaha and it even got deap lol, I just hope you read this and know that your stories and hard work are really appreciated and that they have a really HUGE impact on your readers , to me it did and I want to end this really boring long comment by saying thank you I love you and apsulutly stunning work
peachykay
#3
THIS IS ONE OF MY FAVORITE BTS FICS!!
This is beautifully written, and I did vote on my old account which was Krissica 15 and yea also thanks for the advice.
Once I get more points I will definitely upvote it! Continue on your amazing works!
PrincessJin4Life590
#4
THIS WAS LITERALLY ONE OF THE BEST FICS IVE EVER READ!!!!!!!!!!!
I cried when I finished
This was so beautifulllllllll
AGHHHHHH
*UPVOTEUPVOTEUPVOTE*
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR SHARING!!!!!!!!! <3333333
AnieNana
#5
Chapter 51: This story is amazing! U should make it to a book!!! That chapter where V died made me cry T.T I really love that the chapters are so long because I never wanted this story to end. I was reading it in every free minute. I really like your style of writing. It feels so real and detailed. Continue writing amazing stories like that! Thank you author nim. I'm going to subscribe to your new story ^.^
kaseume
#6
Chapter 51: When I was half through with this story, I was debating with myself whether if I should keep on reading or skip to the last chapter... First reason is because I was really curious xd Second is because the chapters are too lengthy... Don't get me wrong, I love lengthy chapters but I find the chapters are filled with too many flashbacks and to be honest, too detailed narration. I was skipping paragraphs when I was reading and I didn't want to because I enjoy reading through every word but it was really packed with irrelevant description. For the ending, it was surprisingly good! It made me pity Jimin, which I already did starting from the beginning, but at least he got the girl at last. I was angry at Taehyung for always making rash decisions and I think he had anger issues? But his death was tragic and it did made me felt bad for him... just a little. I like your story on the whole because it really stuck to the angst theme and there were lots of plot twists and the style was great. But I just hope that you could shorten the narrations and concentrate more on the main story line? I'm not saying that Minnie's family or Sooyoung or Krystal or Jin and Seoyeon's relationship are not needed, they helped to give me a comprehensive view on Minnie's life and surroundings but it just feel as if there are too many events going on at the same time and as a reader, I can't concentrate on Minnie's story. It was a nice read and good job on your first fanfic! I'm looking forward to reading more of your work ~ ^^
snsdkara #7
Chapter 51: This made me cry a lot I loved this fanfic ❤
ESKPOP #8
Chapter 51: Hello~~ I'm back!! Finally.. I've been waiting for like ever to be able to read this story again.. I feel so bad because I don't even know it myself but somehow I couldn't login at all I tried so many times but it just wouldn't let me in... T-T... now that I'm back the first thing I checked was this story.. I was heart broken to see that it was already completed.. I read it all and all I could do was cry.. Dear Author.. this story was the first story that got me into reading fanfic. Well to be precise it was because of this story that I even found this website.. lol for real tho.. thanks to you I'm now a reading freak who can't stop reading.. ^-^ .. I look forward to reading more of your amazing stories.. a lot of love and supports from your #1;)FAN!!!!.. *ps.. I've cried so many times because of reading this story then crying for my entire life problems.. this story will forever be in my head circling around in my memories.. so when ever some says foreigners...you know I'll always think of this.. yes it's that serious.. this story has got me good.. T-T.. (your one and only E S K P O P )BTS&ARMY