Goodbye, Paradise

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Two years have passed since Kaito and Skye made their promise, and life continues on a beautiful path towards paradise, and a happily ever after, not just for them, but for Zoie and Akio, and maybe even Naiara, love's biggest skeptic. But a love isn't worth keeping if it isn't worth fighting for, and this group of friends has plenty of battles ahead. Will paradise remain in reach?

 

 

Sequel to C R U S H 

Foreword

Hiro Mizushima as Kaito Nakamura
 
Jun Matsumoto as Akio Ellis
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oceansofxo #1
Chapter 13: Sweet. I like how you show glimpses of all the characters lives randomly. Kaito is right. There is no need to rush.
Lotuspassion #2
Chapter V part 2 I can’t say anything I would’ve been eager to move in as well ☺️
oceansofxo #3
Chapter 12: But Naiara, just pushed Matthew away instead of asking him about this "other woman". She just literally has poor communication skills. If you want to know something just ask. You don't let it just slip through your hands without knowing the truth.

I swear she is so muleheaded. She letting thought and not proof get in her way. Really, she is getting in her own way.
oceansofxo #4
Chapter 11: Great! This update was sweet. I like how her relationship with her soon to be in laws has progressed in a very positive way. You see Sumire and Takeshi, Black girls don't bite.

I like the progression of the mothers relationship as well. It is very nice when the matriarchs can have a congenial relationship as well. I really like this family gathering. It is so important to be good to each other. Welcome back Authornim. It has been a pretty good while since "I seent" ya in these streets.
Yoongi1230 #5
Chapter 8: Dammmnit I was getting excited to get to the nxt chapter!!! Keep going I love their story!!!
oceansofxo #6
Chapter 7: Sweet. They getting married. I was thinking this was a new story. Then I realized you my dear authornim hasn't updated in quite some time. Nonetheless, this was a good update.
Sharo001 708 streak #7
Chapter 6: I don't believe Matthew is cheating (too easy under the circumstances IMO), but there is definitely something going on. He needs to open up, and Nai needs to stop jumping to conclusions. Communication is the key. :)
oceansofxo #8
Chapter 6: I think Naiara needs to ask Matthew instead of speculating. Even though gut instincts are the truth. He could be. But who knows?
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