It's our paradise, and it's our war zone

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It had started innocently. A high school kind of love. Unexpected yet so predictable. Giddy, childish, carefree. He had fallen for her. She had fallen for him. It had been two years, with hardly any conflicts arising between them. 

However, the deeper it got, the more serious it became, the deeper it got, the more they wanted to give to each other, and of course, receive. He loves her. She loves him. So much that it hurt them. They would rather suffer at each other's hands than anyone else's. But then again, they would rather give up on their love than to make the other suffer. Outside factors were always what made those doubts arose in their heads. They'd keep refusing them to win over their feelings. An entitlement they had towards the other, desperate to render paradise to the woman and the man they loved, which was naturally beyond their human abilities. It didn't make any sense, yet they didn't want to give up on this quest to heaven. But it was rendering them hell at the same time. 

So what was best. Fight more and more because of the frustration their helplessness made them feel, just to make up and ignore the fact that some cracks can never close back.

Or break up, and preserve the memory of once having been happy together, knowing that they can't live without each other.

It was on to them. To choose the fate of their love. 

Foreword

My first ever fanfiction, a 2hyun one, triggered by the...mess, that has been going on around HyunSeung. Named from a line of Zayn Malik's Pillowtalk merely because I like this song and it fits the overall mood of my story, but not correlated to it one bit haha.

This is a story based on my imagination, truths, likely truths, my debatable stances, my worries and my hopes.

I hope you'll enjoy it :)

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skylla321 #1
Chapter 32: Love the chapter explanations!
jjawon #2
Missing you already :(
jjawon #3
Uhhhmm. . . This is the most vulnerable and fragile Hyunseung I have ever seen him so far. Jeez, I actually thought that he'll gone insane in the end, this is probably the side of him I've been yearning to see for quite some time now, I felt so helpless for him. His emotions were just so clear, his pain, his love and his fear to lose her have gotten under my skin. His desperation to hold unto her until the end, his inner struggle and his weakness being exposed in front of her, it was intense, sad, and beautiful. To be honest, I cried last night while reading this so I wasn't able to leave my comment because I felt heavy knowing that this is the end. I hope this will not be the last story that you'll ever write about Hyunseung and Hyuna. I can't help but to feel annoyed seeing that the other readers doesn't even bother to leave any comment not even a small word of appreciation for the fact that you've been doing your best to update on time consistently and for writing such a beautiful story. Now, I wonder what is there to anticipate in every Thursday since this is indeed the end?
Thank you so much, and forgive me for my harsh and repetitive comments. By the way, on your foreword, you said that what makes you write this story was that particular post of Hyunseung in IG which was also the scene during the end, may I ask why is that? Or do you really think that Hyuna was with him during that day?
jjawon #4
Aaaaaahhhh!!! I'm gonna read this at home, I'm still in the office right now :( I wanna go home, the break is over!!!! Grrr!!
jjawon #5
Chapter 30: My heart skips a beat, we will always wait for you, please take your time. I don't want this story to end just yet but that's how it is. Fighting!!!
jjawon #6
Chapter 29: I actually remember that moment when Hyuna left for Macau for Cube concert, she was really down those times, you can tell by her eyes and demeanor that something was off. I also thought that it was probably because of G.Na and Hyunseung. Seeing this second to the last chapter, I can tell that the end will be simple and beautiful, however, I'm still hoping for Hyunseung to show a little bit more if only possible.

What I was really curious about is what does he actually feel when Junhyung told him that it was not him who's going to comeback to Hyuna, but it was Hyuna who's going to return to him, I know it hurts of course, but it was really the part that I'm most frustrated, because I really think that his feelings should have put into details after treating Hyuna like trash. I still believe that what he's showing right now is not really enough because what he did and told to Hyuna on previous chapter was just really unforgivable, hence, even if I'm not making any sense, I think it will be better if at least, Hyunseung's pain and fear should have given more details rather than just telling that he's crying or something. Since Hyuna forgave him once again, at least we should have given a little detail as to what kind of efforts he did for him to be forgiven and what kind of hell did he have to undergo as the consequence of what he did to Hyuna. Just saying as a reader though, I know I'm being repetitive with my opinion, it's because to be brutally honest, I feel like Hyunseung's love on the previous few chapters were really lackluster, the story is beautiful, but it's the only thing that I'm frustrated about.
CaptainG #7
Chapter 28: Hello!! ^.^ I log this story, never found one with such a great plot and writing. You are amazing! Thank you for this story. I will wait for your next updat with anticipation. Take as long as it takes cause you're just amazing. Fighting!!!
n_silver89 #8
Chapter 27: TroubleMaker need to survive..
skylla321 #9
Chapter 27: If this really happened in true life, then he would have been officially removed from Cube. Thank goodness it's a fan fiction,
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