better yet worst

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would jaebum be able to differentiate between who he is, his duty and his own feelings. when his imagination comes to life things get complicated and he has to choose, of-course things do not end there because there is another party in this

Foreword

my first time writing
idk it just popped in my head
hope you like it ! 
i hope you'd write your opinion too
bad or good, it'll motivate me 

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Erah23 #1
Chapter 5: When i first read it I THOught Youngjae was the teacher and Jaebum was the student...
LIttle master made me smile hahah kind of not suitable for YOungjae here. I MEan the image makes me think of sunshine YOungjae
xxxiiixxx #2
Chapter 17: It wouldn't hurt to add the part 2!!!!!! Just sayin ;) this has been a good read, thanks :)
damnouf #3
Chapter 13: yo ntyrand
ntyrand #4
Chapter 12: yo damnouf
TWINpower #5
Chapter 12: Ooooh, this fanfic is cute xD Love it <3 Jaebum is just too funny lol
Throught you structure your writing in a strange was, it would be a lot easier to read if you would make a space between each character talkin and thinking.... if you know what I mean xD
xxxiiixxx #6
Chapter 11: Stalker Youngjae lmao
Can't wait for the next chapter :)
MillyMila #7
Chapter 10: Each time i read this i keep getting reminded that i love this :)
MillyMila #8
Chapter 8: Wow that was amazing!
MillyMila #9
Chapter 7: Omg so cute...yessssssssssssss
Sooooooo cute I'm sho happy（＾ô＾）
MillyMila #10
That would be fantastic if you finished it. Don't leave me hanging!!! pls. :'D
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