Erroneous Data

Description

Do you know that feeling when you decide to do something but the moment right after starting it you realize this has been such a ty idea? Well, Donghae sure as hell knows. So after blacking out for a moment he wakes up again. But when the data to his life got re-loaded something went wrong. The girl he has been dating for weeks doesn't know him anymore. His friends don't remember many of the things Donghae knows have happened before. People and their stories around him have changed but he hasn't.

But was this a chance to fix a previous mistake?

Foreword

Donghae had found his old skateboard. A couple of years ago he had been a really good skateboarder but had lost interest and so it had been collecting dust in the basement. He was supposed to take the skateboard to some kid of his mother's friend and he was on his way to do so when he got across a small old skateboard park. It wouldn't hurt to try how much he could still do, right? It was late evening, the sun was setting and the sky was an intense orange color at one end - dark blue at the other.

He went to the park. The ground was lower than the street so there were stairs with a railing leading down to it. He had managed before to slide down a railing on his skateboard so he decided to try that first. He went back a few steps, got on the skateboard and swung his leg, getting a lot of speed before skillfully lifting his skateboard in the right moment to hop onto the railing. But this was all that he was still able to do because in the next moment he fell face-forward towards the stairs. Before he could realize how he hit it, before the pain managed to reach him - he out.

When Donghae woke up again it was pitch dark around him. He was lying on his back at the end of the stairs, a leg lifted up on a few, the skateboard had rolled away. He blinked his eyes open and saw stars sparkling in the sky. Then his head started pounding and his body arching. He groaned quietly as he sat up, causing a strong stinging pain in his head. When he touched it he got a bit of blood onto his fingers but it seemed mostly dry. So the bleeding had probably stopped. He guessed it hadn't been that much anyway. Donghae looked around the empty park. What a damn stupid idea to jump down the railing with a skateboard.

It took him a few more minutes before he carefully stood up and picked up the skateboard again. He would take it to the boy another day. Now he would head home and check his head before his parents returned from their weekend trip.

Tomorrow was monday...


 

*Charas are in high school, like 17/18yo

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aces_kaira99
#1
Chapter 10: cute....
yaaaah #2
Chapter 10: Awww so cute, I really liked your fic! So mysterious and kind of addicting, hard to stop reading. I hope you continue it though, it was so good :)
haesthetics
#3
Chapter 10: ADMITTEDLY I FEEL A BID DEFLATED BC THATS THE ENDING BUT I WLDNT GO AS FAR AS SAYING THE FIC IS """WEAK""" that comment makes me so mad oooo my go d anyway i liked this a lot!!! i like how it leaves a lot of strings untied so the reader can kind of draw their own conclusion and finish it by themselves if u get what i mean?? the whole simplicity yet the ambiguity of the ending really is just open and freeing and very liberating <3 i also liked how u kind of explained that the only thing rly missing from donghae's life was his relationship with hyukjae because that caused so many othr things and when he goes back its like he was sent back in order to repair his relationship w hyukjae!! or is that thinking too deeply HAHAHA

anyway i loved it a lot!! thanks for writing such a nice fic!!!! ^^ (+++ hyukjae blushing and eunhae flirting is the cutest thing in the whole worlddddd!!!!!!!) have a great day and hope u dont get too stressed doing whatever it is ur procrastinating doing!! :-)
TheNarratress
#4
Chapter 10: Wait! That’s the end? No!!!
I want to know how their date went and how HyukJae reacted once he found out about the alternate reality thing TT.TT

However, the story was good. I enjoyed reading it very much. Good job, author-nim ^____^
I’m looking foreword reading more stories from you.
ThanKYU for writing and uploading~ <3
milesmilehyuk #5
Chapter 10: do not offended author but this story was very weak, sorry :(
missmyeolchi #6
Chapter 10: Ah! Too bad it's so short! I really liked the story a lot so I'm sad it already ended. But omg the ending is so cute. I really like an ending like this. It's an open ending but you still know everything is going to be fine. And it's really sweet and cute. I really loved the story! :D
Diamonte_s
#7
Chapter 10: I was shocked when I saw completed tag there but it was okay ^^
Hae is really moving carefully but steadily to their relationship and hyuk doesn't seem to has any problem with it.. :)
Thank you for this short story ^^
Diamonte_s
#8
Chapter 8: Eunhae are getting close step by step :)) and hyuk didn't freak out at all when hae told him all the stuff.. Maybe he's trying to understand hae too :D
TaiShanNiangNiang #9
Chapter 6: So Donghae has in mind what he thinks he has to do... Now let's see how Hyukjae reacts to all of this! (After all this is an alternate reality, and this Hyukjae isn't exactly the same as in the previous reality) Ack, alternate realities, infinite possibilities! Great update :)