Melting

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Emotions following a logical path will never be truly accepted by another's heart. We learn to embrace and then to express emotions adhering to the lines of society's normality. If so, how is the emotions conveyed and received first hand any different from capturing it through the lens? How many of us have eyes who honestly reflect our true emotions?

A moonsun fic surrounding the above points. This fic will be a slow burn. Updates comes irregularly. Hope you may understand and be patient with me. Comments, subscriptions and views are greatly appreciated. May you enjoy.

Thank you.

J.

 

 

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radmoorie #1
Chapter 15: Geez i love this ,its too deep for me but hey this is good
cjmoo_ #2
Chapter 14: Love the description in the second and third paragraphs. I like the part where Byul stammered, with so many thoughts entering her mind. I feel like I should reread this story. I got confused at the end when you revealed that Byul had an episode.
cjmoo_ #3
Chapter 14: Will comment on this soon! ;-;
cjmoo_ #4
Chapter 13: That second paragraph...I love it so much. I really felt Byul's raw feelings and a sense of hopelessness from her. Interesting how there was some sort of control that Byul had when she confronted Yongsun, but that control was handed back so quickly.
me_funky #5
Chapter 14: i like this story..please update soon..
Chuby23 #6
Chapter 13: This is very unique . It is fresh to see Byulie unusual way of thinking. Great work author nim
cjmoo_ #7
Chapter 12: Wow, I just love the overarching theme throughout this chapter. For some reason the whole dinner scene really felt like a play, with measured actions (like Wheein having a micro-shift in her eyes) and silence (or more of tension I should say?, since the silence was actually filled with Byul internally questioning/berating herself). It's really interesting how Byul sees herself as an actress in a play, where she didn't have control over pretty much anything because Ajusshi was the wrote and directed the dinner. Why is Yongsun referred to as a goldfish though? Enjoyed reading this.
cjmoo_ #8
Chapter 11: I like this line: "If we all had problems that we need to conquer if, by living, we all had to be at war with something or someone, then why live?"
I like the last sentence too. Rather than just thinking about Yongsun, by thinking about the possibility of being conquered, it reflects quite a bit about Byul.
Moonsun2122 #9
Chapter 11: "Kim Yong Sun... will you be the one to conquer or be conquered by?"
Woah I really love this line. The way you describe each character is amazing.

Can't wait for the next update author-nim :)
rawhelln #10
Chapter 11: What is this masterpiece.
The way you write Byul’s character’s got me hooked. I love it. I love this. I’ll be waiting for the next update.
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