Chapter 1: Time travel sort of, with a loop - I like it very much!

Chapter 1: Thank you for writing :)

Chapter 1: at first i was a little confused at the end lol, but it's a beautiful story :)

Chapter 1: wow! it looks like u see the future too. I cant help but amaze because Dont Mess Up My Tempo was Exo's 2018 album and this story was 2016! And wow really!! This reminds me of the album!!! ❤❤

Chapter 1: aww my heart, this story is beautiful ♥

Chapter 1: i was really worried about the ending because i had some negative thoughts :[ they met in a sudden time, but, chanyeol kept to give a bad signal/? towards me by describing his thought :[ baekhyun supposed to be dead, but, thanks to tao (or even LUHAn idk), time was changed and BUSH!!!! so it turned to the first page of their story, didn't it? well. they met again, but, this time they should not be worried about the dead that might separate them :[ it's so beautiful and i'm super impressed by your ability to write a such beautiful story in this early age :( are you a writer? GOOD JOB, GOOD JOB. GOD BLESS YOU /love/

Chapter 1: Oh my god this is so beautiful I am crying

Chapter 1: Bless this story. It's one of the most beautiful stories i have ever read.

Chapter 1: Gosh

Chapter 1: I ing cried
This was beautifull