Chapter 1: I'm so happy I read this.
It had a nice, natural flow and I liked how mature Jongin was (thought he secretly wasn't so much).
Also, I screamed at Kyungsoo because I loved how you wrote him in this so effing much!
Sehun was really cute too and I like the idea of him and Junmyeon being best friends.
All I have to complain about is that I would have loved to read more about them, how they go to Finland, now when they finally confessed to each othr and I'm curious how their relationship evolves and how Sehun reacts when he finds out that they actually made up just a couple of hours after his call with Junmyeon...
But since I like open endings like that as well... I'm content with how it is now as well.
Thank you for another wonderful story, Adele <3
Chapter 1: Ahhhhh, that was the cutest thing ever! I was squealing so much! I really love your writing and I think this one is my favorite of your stories so far!
Chapter 1: I love love love the age switch!! You just don't see it really often and I can't deal with how much I love this story thank God I found it again. So many great things in this fic, keep writing author-nim ^^
Chapter 1: I read your fic yesterday evening but it was so late that I didn't take the time to comment.
I adore! It was interesting because your characters aren't perfect, it's so easy to make perfect characters, who makes everything good, who are so clever... And you didn't, I appreciated. ^^
Everything was cute and well described. I just didn't like the end, I think the magic was a little broken because they talk so much... It was like "time for explications!" but for me it wasn't the moment... I prefered more shyness and akward and cute things, not too much bla bla. The tension weren't there anymore.
Chapter 1: Woah, first of all, this is my first time reading SuKai/KaiHo - and it melts me, I'm not okay, okay? Thank you.
Second of all, THIS LAYOUT IS SO PRETTY AND NEAT AND THAT'S EVERYTHING I LIKE WHY DON'T YOU USE IT MORE OFTEN??
Last but not least, have a nice day. I'm in the mood of re-reading your old stories so.. yeahhhh
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