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Stuck in Neverland
by LokiCraze123
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Kim Hyori (OC), Dongho, Kevin, Eli, Kiseop, AJ, Hyuna, and Fictional Characters
Description
Neverland, a place where people never grow up. It's a place where young people want to go, but as time passes by, they get tired of it. Kim Hyori never believed in those tales until she got sucked into a strange ditch that appeared out of no where. Neverland was nothing like the ones she had heard in fairytales but darker. The only thing that remained the same is people stayed young. She learned there is a single existing kingdom ruled by three brothers. Three step-brothers. They don't despise each other but they don't acknowledge each other either. She soon learns that she is part of a prophecy to protect the kingdom against this darkness. She knew nothing about battle terms or strategies. In fact, she wanted to return home but there was no way until the prophecy is fulfilled. Nobody knew what the outcome of the prophecy was. That all led to fate and it seemed like fate is neither on her side nor against her.
Foreword
Life. Every life has a meaning to it, but it's up to you which path you want to take. There is always a good and bad side to everything. Once in a while, you don't know which is the right decision, but you must choose. There isn't much of a time where someone else writes your fate. If that ever happens, at first, you won't listen to them until there are signs.
Death. Death is a normal thing, but no one appreciates it. No one wants to grow old and die. But once you live longer than you should, everything becomes bland; nothing matters to you. There's nothing new, nothing to explore, and nothing to wonder about.
In Neverland, it's both life and death. People stay young forever, but death can come along for those who are foolish enough to mess with fate. However, death is better than eternal life. Living may seem better, but staying in Neverland changes that perspective. They would accept it like a gift and appreciate the life they had. Being stuck in Neverland is certainly a great misfortune.
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"One is how many will slip away
Two is how many will betray
Three is how many will forget their place
And cause chaos in their own race"
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" 'Wonderland?! Are you stupid? This is not Wonderland! This is Neverland! Pft! Wonderland my ass.' "
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" 'I'm a Shapeshifter.' "
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Rated PG-13 mainly for language, action scenes, and gore(?). Sorry! Hoon's a minor in this one, so he's not included! But don't worry, he'll be important in the sequel ;)
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EXOtic_213 on says about chapter 15:
Is Kevin the one who will slip away..? O.O I'M SCARED. WHAT IF HE SLIPS OUT OF... LIFE?! OHMAHGAWD NO. SLIPPING OUT OF LIFE. MEANING THAT HE'LL DIE. OH HELL NAWH. PLEASE NO. IMMA CRY IF THAT HAPPENS. (but you're the author so.. You have the power to kill off any character you want. XD)
Two is how many will betray.. KiSeop and Rima? I'm fine with Rima, BUT KISEOP'S MY BIAS!! TT^TT
I still don't have any guesses for the 'Three is how many will forget their place.'
No wait. Unless it's Eli, DongHo, and HyoRi.. Ehh.. I'm not confident with this guess.
THANK YOU FOR THE UPDATE!!
shinee4ever2012 on says about chapter 14:
I KNEW IT! THERE'S JUST THIS SUSPICIOUS FEELING AROUND RIMA! >_<
bad soohyun! bad! I SERIOUSLY NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPEN NEXT! i cant wait for the battle! oh! i wonder what AJ gonna say at that time~ maybe a confession? meh..maybe not..NOT a suitable time!
SooHaPark715 on says about chapter 14:
Omfg please update soon! I cant wait for the battle!!! Ermahgerd! Hurry please ~ ;D
EXOtic_213 on says about chapter 14:
OHMAHGAWD!! HOW DARE YOU MAKE ME FREAK OUT LIKE THAT?! You literally made me jump off my chair and spaz on the floor when it was SooHyun who was the bad guy!! ASDFGHJKSHZISBDJSJ
TOO MUCH FEELS!! I TELL YOU, TOO. MUCH. FEELS.
*caps lock off*
Please update again! Oh my god, this is getting too exciting to handle!! >.<
Cakiie on says about chapter 13:
So interesting and awesome *-* I'm curious how this story will end lol. :D
brilliance on says about chapter 10:
this is such a good story
U-KISS IS SO AWESOME~
EXOtic_213 on says about chapter 13:
Bells. ._.
Is it the warning that the Shadows break in or..?
HRHSAIFLGRIGBDLJNS
SooHaPark715 on says about chapter 13:
Bells...???
princess123 on says about chapter 12:
I love it ! I hope you update next chapter asap ... ^^
casimi on says about chapter 12:
Aigooo I got a feeling something bad will happen..but lets just what happens...hehehhe
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